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Anonymous
12/13/22, 7:54 AM
truly an excellent story and concept. really great job
12/13/22, 7:42 AM
This was a stunning piece of work. I am in awe.
12/13/22, 6:41 AM
Ooh, honey, the sexual tension between Bellamy and Papi leading up to that moment they kiss in bed? Feels right out of a fucked-up fairy tale. So damn natural. You’re doing well at building up stakes, too; despite the madness of the situation, I also feel that Papi’s career (I swear I keep forgetting his name, damn Bellamy) is at risk and I’m genuinely worried. (Note that I’m writing this only halfway through the chapter…) One minor tidbit, right when night changed to day, it might have slightly benefited the transition to insert a breaking line, which I think you can get by writing five dashes next to each other or something. Perhaps again before the “library” paragraph, though that one’s up to your discretion since you might have just done one already. I’m worried about what Thad might know or do, having seen Alex and Bellamy in the study room. I appreciate that, despite the riotous and—dare I say it?—_unrealistic_ (gods forbid) homoeroticism of KOK and this college in general, you’ve simultaneously maintained a sense of reality to the story that convinces me that just saying “I’m fucking your son” wouldn’t really solve the problem; indeed, it _would_ be career ending. Alright, so let’s see what’s next… ~~and expect me to hit you up soon, possibly to brainstorm about crazy gay frat shenanigans…~~

Sebastián Apollo
12/13/22, 7:26 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) This chapter came very naturally to me. I actually wrote about half of it, everything from the beginning to about halfway through the library, in a single sitting. You know when the ideas are just flowing through your head like a movie, and your just typing and describing the flow as it enters your head? The entire Bellamy/Alex conversation in bed was something really important for me to try and nail properly, so I hope I did it justice! Thank you for the suggestion, I suppose the timeskips could've been a bit clearer. I don't want to spoil anything for now. But let's just say..._I don't think we've seen the last of Thad or his wild fraternity friends anytime soon_... > and expect me to hit you up soon, possibly to brainstorm about crazy gay frat shenanigans… _Please do._ 😉 As always, Soren, I appreciate your comments!
12/12/22, 10:18 PM
I love this! The hints at Ferula Drudeana are fun little extras and the way this story pulls the reader in along with the main character is what entices me most about it. Agent Hardwick is a little too confident and both misunderstanding the forces at work and some circumstance teach him the true danger. The succumbing to the power in the airport is beautifully paced and as grounded as a fantastical scenario can be. Hardwick is relatable and you feel for him. I'm glad he got something he wanted out of the experience. One wonders whether he has any other lingering effects. But his quick thinking and dedication to the job saved all those horny people! Great story, thank you for posting!

12/13/22, 5:22 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) It's amazing to have a reader like you who picks up on the little details I'm working in! So grateful to have you to read and chat with about these stories! <3 Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts!
12/13/22, 4:39 AM
oh, to be given magic bottom surgery by some sort of magical horny curse.....

12/13/22, 5:21 AM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) That is *totally* the real fantasy here for me, ha! <3 <3 <3
Kip
12/12/22, 8:45 PM
This was fun. Awesome setup, got a bit jumbled down the stretch, but really great. We could do with more trans men getting their own dicks (and balls) in stories on this site. Positive energy.

12/13/22, 4:12 AM
@[Kip](/user/show/27842) Thank you so much for the comment! I wanted to play a little bit with memory and intelligence loss, so it sounds like that's coming through. Glad you enjoyed and loved getting the chance to add to the positive trans rep on the site!
12/11/22, 7:58 AM
This is a great start. You did a crazy amount of world building in a short amount of time with the frat house. The bratty-ness of Bellamy is hilarious, teasing and sexy. It was also really cute to see Alexander try and keep his cool through everything going on. Can't wait to read more!

Sebastián Apollo
12/13/22, 2:34 AM
@[JaysonGayman](/user/show/10026898) So sorry for the late response, as I've barely saw this now. Thank you so much for the kind words! Alex/Bellamy are quite the pair and I had a lot of fun writing their interactions off eachother. And, _you didn't hear it from me_, but I don't think we've seen the last of those crazy frat boys yet! 😉
12/13/22, 2:20 AM
Can't wait for the next part! This story is really creative
12/13/22, 1:57 AM
This is going into such an unexpected yet totally hot direction! The 'citizens' are steadily becoming more drone-like while jake makes refinements to his technologies, we can see him building the drone pup program that we first saw with the guy who became a police dog, we can see the first iterations of the mouth plugs that we saw in drone world 3 and how they work. Its all so unsettling but so hot! I am very interested to see what James' new daily life will change to. I didn't expect him to be a baseball player, though it is obvious on the re-read, and now that he is a personal gift to jake i wonder how that is going to affect his baseball career. I am curious as to how aware he is that his dads are now his drones, if at all. He seems to not even really remember his brother was anything other than his drone pup. I would wonder what kind of elation or surprise such revelations would bring, or if somehow James would feel some slight upset? I dont see him being upset though, possibly even more enamored of his drones and pup? I would like to know more about J0001 and J0002, what experiments they are going to run on James, and who they were before devoting themselves to jake's personal service. They seem to be just as into the drone tech as jake is, and i wonder if thats natural. As always i love each chapter you write, even if i am always late to read and late to comment. Thank you so much for another steamy installment of this series!
Titan
12/13/22, 1:47 AM
What a clever tale for the season. Loved it Wesley.