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12/13/22, 1:57 AM
This is going into such an unexpected yet totally hot direction! The 'citizens' are steadily becoming more drone-like while jake makes refinements to his technologies, we can see him building the drone pup program that we first saw with the guy who became a police dog, we can see the first iterations of the mouth plugs that we saw in drone world 3 and how they work. Its all so unsettling but so hot! I am very interested to see what James' new daily life will change to. I didn't expect him to be a baseball player, though it is obvious on the re-read, and now that he is a personal gift to jake i wonder how that is going to affect his baseball career. I am curious as to how aware he is that his dads are now his drones, if at all. He seems to not even really remember his brother was anything other than his drone pup. I would wonder what kind of elation or surprise such revelations would bring, or if somehow James would feel some slight upset? I dont see him being upset though, possibly even more enamored of his drones and pup? I would like to know more about J0001 and J0002, what experiments they are going to run on James, and who they were before devoting themselves to jake's personal service. They seem to be just as into the drone tech as jake is, and i wonder if thats natural. As always i love each chapter you write, even if i am always late to read and late to comment. Thank you so much for another steamy installment of this series!
Titan
12/13/22, 1:47 AM
What a clever tale for the season. Loved it Wesley.
Waouh histoire incroyable
12/13/22, 12:33 AM
Pas au l'histoire elle est incroyable j'aurais vraiment aimé être à sa place
12/12/22, 11:45 PM
Short sweet and horny! Great job dude
12/12/22, 11:26 PM
I will read all of this you got!!! Possibly my favourite series ever.
12/12/22, 9:39 PM
Wow, just, wow. First of, the base idea is super hot, and something I've actually fantasised about myself. I don't know if you're willing to go further with the story, but there is so much potential! Like, Peyton could be fored to endure countless hours of forced foot worship and edging and tickling on a daily basis. Or could be forced to sub for other foot masters for their videos. Anyhow, I love the story, love the idea! You've great imagination for super hot kinky scenarios!

12/12/22, 11:12 PM
@[Jet313](/user/show/10009595) Thank you so much for this comment! Glad you liked! It def could probably go further. I don't have plans to but maybe I'll pass it along to someone else or make a community series haha.
Anonymous
12/12/22, 10:50 PM
Franchement j'ai adoré cette histoire pour un début c'est vachement bien
Tanner
12/12/22, 10:35 PM
This is really great especially For a first story. The stuff with the football team is a little dark for my taste but the rest of it is amazing. Particularly the stuff with the coaches and the teacher. Really great writing.
12/12/22, 10:30 PM
Fantastic story. I feel a strong kinship with Kyle.
12/12/22, 6:08 PM
Finally! This was the one I voted for, and daaaaaaaamn it was worth the wait! My vote is for Ethan Has an Emergency, just because it is the plot I relate the most right now...

12/12/22, 7:07 PM
@[SmwrLs](/user/show/1005172) Lol, this is the one I wanted to write the most, too! I’m glad I got to it. *Slaps an I Voted sticker on your codpiece. If you don’t usually wear codpieces, then congratulations! Now you’re wearing one. Enjoy your new life.*