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12/13/22, 9:28 AM
Very hot story you've written here I especially enjoyed the coach getting mind fucked Thanks for writing :)
12/13/22, 9:23 AM
Love the humiliation in this story! It’s excellent!
Anonymous
12/13/22, 7:54 AM
truly an excellent story and concept. really great job
12/13/22, 7:42 AM
This was a stunning piece of work. I am in awe.
12/13/22, 6:41 AM
Ooh, honey, the sexual tension between Bellamy and Papi leading up to that moment they kiss in bed? Feels right out of a fucked-up fairy tale. So damn natural. You’re doing well at building up stakes, too; despite the madness of the situation, I also feel that Papi’s career (I swear I keep forgetting his name, damn Bellamy) is at risk and I’m genuinely worried. (Note that I’m writing this only halfway through the chapter…) One minor tidbit, right when night changed to day, it might have slightly benefited the transition to insert a breaking line, which I think you can get by writing five dashes next to each other or something. Perhaps again before the “library” paragraph, though that one’s up to your discretion since you might have just done one already. I’m worried about what Thad might know or do, having seen Alex and Bellamy in the study room. I appreciate that, despite the riotous and—dare I say it?—_unrealistic_ (gods forbid) homoeroticism of KOK and this college in general, you’ve simultaneously maintained a sense of reality to the story that convinces me that just saying “I’m fucking your son” wouldn’t really solve the problem; indeed, it _would_ be career ending. Alright, so let’s see what’s next… ~~and expect me to hit you up soon, possibly to brainstorm about crazy gay frat shenanigans…~~

Sebastián Apollo
12/13/22, 7:26 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) This chapter came very naturally to me. I actually wrote about half of it, everything from the beginning to about halfway through the library, in a single sitting. You know when the ideas are just flowing through your head like a movie, and your just typing and describing the flow as it enters your head? The entire Bellamy/Alex conversation in bed was something really important for me to try and nail properly, so I hope I did it justice! Thank you for the suggestion, I suppose the timeskips could've been a bit clearer. I don't want to spoil anything for now. But let's just say..._I don't think we've seen the last of Thad or his wild fraternity friends anytime soon_... > and expect me to hit you up soon, possibly to brainstorm about crazy gay frat shenanigans… _Please do._ 😉 As always, Soren, I appreciate your comments!
12/12/22, 10:18 PM
I love this! The hints at Ferula Drudeana are fun little extras and the way this story pulls the reader in along with the main character is what entices me most about it. Agent Hardwick is a little too confident and both misunderstanding the forces at work and some circumstance teach him the true danger. The succumbing to the power in the airport is beautifully paced and as grounded as a fantastical scenario can be. Hardwick is relatable and you feel for him. I'm glad he got something he wanted out of the experience. One wonders whether he has any other lingering effects. But his quick thinking and dedication to the job saved all those horny people! Great story, thank you for posting!

12/13/22, 5:22 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) It's amazing to have a reader like you who picks up on the little details I'm working in! So grateful to have you to read and chat with about these stories! <3 Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts!
12/13/22, 4:39 AM
oh, to be given magic bottom surgery by some sort of magical horny curse.....

12/13/22, 5:21 AM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) That is *totally* the real fantasy here for me, ha! <3 <3 <3
Kip
12/12/22, 8:45 PM
This was fun. Awesome setup, got a bit jumbled down the stretch, but really great. We could do with more trans men getting their own dicks (and balls) in stories on this site. Positive energy.

12/13/22, 4:12 AM
@[Kip](/user/show/27842) Thank you so much for the comment! I wanted to play a little bit with memory and intelligence loss, so it sounds like that's coming through. Glad you enjoyed and loved getting the chance to add to the positive trans rep on the site!
12/11/22, 7:58 AM
This is a great start. You did a crazy amount of world building in a short amount of time with the frat house. The bratty-ness of Bellamy is hilarious, teasing and sexy. It was also really cute to see Alexander try and keep his cool through everything going on. Can't wait to read more!

Sebastián Apollo
12/13/22, 2:34 AM
@[JaysonGayman](/user/show/10026898) So sorry for the late response, as I've barely saw this now. Thank you so much for the kind words! Alex/Bellamy are quite the pair and I had a lot of fun writing their interactions off eachother. And, _you didn't hear it from me_, but I don't think we've seen the last of those crazy frat boys yet! 😉
12/13/22, 2:20 AM
Can't wait for the next part! This story is really creative