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12/10/22, 5:32 PM
Interesting mix of fable, comics hot super being. Well written.
12/10/22, 5:09 PM
You write rimming so well, oh my God!! I could really learn from the sheer level of description of the sex. And you really nailed Brent's character voice. This world you've come up with has so much potential for crazy hot porny scenarios. I can't wait to see what else you cook up :)
12/10/22, 5:03 PM
Damn, that was a hot rimming scene! You really played up every different sensation in a way that gave each movement a life of its own. I was never bored of the description; it drew me right along. I hope you write more about Apollo City—there’s no smut setting I love more than an all-male, homoerotic or straight-up-gay world, and I’m sure your imagination runs as wild as mine. I’ll be keeping an eye out!
12/10/22, 11:07 AM
This story was a real trip! The cognitive dissonance with politics surrounding sexual orientation and whatnot...ugh! It's so infuriating to say the least how ingrained and invested some people have taken it on the _right_. How disappointed I was on Twitter when I found one of my favorite Canadian bodybuilders liking a lot of _conservative_ bs. I would love to see him run this race though. I digress, This story was more lighthearted than I expected, (Which is great!) like the other ones on here that had a theme with politics. I'm glad I got to read this during my "it's 5 in the morning, I'm too horny to sleep at the moment" time. It would be a pleasure to see more of your work in the future, as I start reading some of your previous publications.

12/10/22, 4:56 PM
@[Anima](/user/show/929667) With some exceptions, lighthearted is my brand 😁. At least when it gets political I try to keep tongue firmly in cheek. Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad it hit the early-morning spot, and I hope the rest of my stuff works for you just as well.
12/10/22, 11:24 AM
Great start! I added the Secret Santa tag to the story.

12/10/22, 4:09 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Oh gosh! That was silly! Thanks!
12/10/22, 3:05 PM
Interesting story based on a nice idea! I am curious about the further progress within your universe. Your story will benefit a lot from a proofreader who's a native english speaker. Reading a story with too many mistakes makes it a bit less enjoyable. Keep up your enthusiasm. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
12/10/22, 10:59 AM
An instant classic. Love it! Himbo was my tag and you've done such a great job with it. Perfect :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

12/10/22, 2:40 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) That means a lot! I don't usually do much with the himbo stuff, so hard to tell if I hit the sweet spot or not.
12/9/22, 8:25 PM
Gotta say one thing I really like about this series is hat the dominant roles shift alot and everyone seems to get bitched out at some point. I really hope as the narrative continues Dick will get a turn to go dark and really break some people. Plus I'm anxiously awaiting Rico having his own downfall, at least for a bit.

12/10/22, 12:22 AM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Hi Fanboi214!! THANK YOU for your kind words!!:smiley: I appreciate that you noticed that the DOM roles shift & that "everyone gets their turn" (so 2 speak)!:smiling_imp: Dick is in for an "interesting TWISTED scenario" coming up in the next couple of chapters, so I hope that you dig it...:pray: as U said, everyone (EVENTUALLY) gets "bitched out", so he will be "satisfied" (in a manner of speaking):zany_face: AND...I will DEF take your suggestion to heart about Rico taking a fall (at least temporarily) in an upcoming chapter... it'll have 2 be from someone we "least expect" (I think)...so I'm open to ANY/ALL ideas!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: SUPER GR8FUL 4 your time, positive comments & continued interest in this story--- ENJOY the wknd & Happy Holidaze!!:sparkler:

12/10/22, 12:55 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hehe I definitely have ideas :P I have my biases but I'll just say that, Rico there has been masquerading as 'master Robin' for quite a while and a Robin or two might take issue with that. Eitherway excited to see where this goes and trust your vision.

12/10/22, 2:04 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) G'Mornin Fanboi214!! THANK YOU 4 gettin back 2 me so fast w/your thoughts/ideas!:sparkler: You're SO right about Rico & the whole Master Robin angle...lemme think upon a really juicy twist on this tangent!:smiling_imp: Again, appreciate your input & continued interest--:wink: ENJOY your weekend!!:sunglasses:
12/10/22, 1:27 PM
This was just sensationally hot.
12/10/22, 1:04 PM
Great story. Love the control. Would love a sequel with the other slave/master. And, even if it isn't needed, a cock cage for the slave that can't pleasure themselves. He'd keep it on at the gym and it'd be noticed in the sauna.

12/10/22, 1:26 PM
@[Zapper350](/user/show/921752) If you mean Dave, who Ethan texts with, you can read about him now: https://www.gaycollarstories.com/series/show/10002174 in "Dave's Leather Journal"