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12/9/22, 12:06 PM
That’s so awesome I’m glad he got a happy ending. Although I’m curious as to the lost records of him scaring off the bigots and the extended pride scene haha. What a good boy.
12/9/22, 11:45 AM
Jack, as always great story!
Subboy-00
12/9/22, 10:19 AM
Hot whould love a part 2
12/9/22, 8:03 AM
I definitely like this ending more haha but I’m a sucker for a happy ending. Jared was a creep and I kinda hope he ended up learning a valuable lesson. And that he maybe forgave them for what they did. Because yea he was awful hahaha. Well done.
12/9/22, 8:01 AM
the real problem is just that AI-generated writing or art isn't very good and this story is no exception. it's a bad story. flat, dull, no flair. you can feel the lack of passion behind its creation and that's one thing that really helps when wanting to turn on other readers. the detailed descriptions you asked for in the prompt are basically non-existent.
12/9/22, 8:01 AM
I final word. This story is awesome. To make it awe inspiring just make it into a Saga that goes on & on!!!!!
12/9/22, 7:10 AM
Great story love how Brock is a great big brother for Teddy. Hope you do more chapters.

12/9/22, 7:46 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Thank you! I might do a sequel, but it might take a while!
12/9/22, 12:41 AM
Yeah, I'd give up my personality for some lap time with big brother Brock. Is that so wrong?

12/9/22, 7:46 AM
@Strppdinchgo Not at all, who wouldn't?!
Nooooope
12/9/22, 4:52 AM
Sorry but AI generated items dont belong here. Its not art or creation; its the bastardization of art at its core.
Anonymous
12/8/22, 8:34 PM
are there plans for a sequel?

12/9/22, 3:22 AM
@Anonymous I have occasionally thought about it but I'm sure it will be nothing like what you are expecting!