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Anonymous
12/7/22, 7:15 PM
Absolutely loved this story! Great premise, the writing was fantastic, and it was just a really fun story.

12/7/22, 10:37 PM
@Anonymous Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so glad you liked it!
Sebastián Apollo
12/7/22, 10:21 PM
How lucky is Teddy that he has such a loving big bro in Brock! 🥰

12/7/22, 10:37 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) The luckiest boy in the world 🥰
12/7/22, 10:34 PM
Another great story thanks
12/7/22, 8:31 PM
Great story love where its going now with Paul in it I can see Paul outsmarting Dan and having the 2 of them at his mercy keep it going it's a very hot story
HungryforSanta
12/7/22, 8:22 PM
What a hot story! I wish I could be kidnapped by Nick just like Sean... Or should I say Seamus so I could be made mindless and helpless while being transformed into a balding bearded bear unable to remember anything besides devotion to Nick willing to do anything for him while craving his touch and body... If only
12/7/22, 2:43 AM
Oh my, my, my! what a rush! It's terribly well written, insanely hot and deliciously long! I LOVE IT!! Both the mental and physical transformations are great, this story it's definitely a new favorite of mine. I would have liked a description of Justice Man's uniform, because I loved the detail of how his uniform becomes progressively bigger and baggier as his body turns scrawnier, but again, that's just one small petty thing. The detail of being renamed as Justice Bitch is great, as well is to have him correcting others for saying his demeaning new name right. I don't know why I love that, maybe it's because it's a way to alter, distort and corrupt someone's identity without completely replacing it. I second to @darkblade2814 's comment, I'd love to read a sequel or a spin off exploring different changes in the heroes you mentioned, Mighty Mammoth, Stretch, and Black Diamond, I'm sure Dr. Bedlam has a previous version of his Oppositron hidden somewhere else, along with a suculent new story waiting to be told.

12/7/22, 7:12 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) I’m glad you liked it. I left space for a sequel and have a general premise for it, but I’m not sure if I’ll follow through. My rough outline is Justice Bitch rescues Dr. Bedlam from the hero jail, and Dr. Bedlam has a series of gadgets that Justice Bitch uses to subdue the heroes. The end would be Justice Bitch subduing the hero he formerly sidekicked for. I don’t have much beyond that.

12/7/22, 5:34 PM
@[The Influencer](/user/show/777056) Sounds perfect to me! It's a natural way to close Justice Bitch character's arc of corruption, and a great way to finish the story. You could split it in two or more chapters to give all the characters a propper time to change according to your likes. I'll be anxiously waiting for it!
Jim
12/7/22, 4:35 PM
Dude, you gonna finish this???
Zai
12/7/22, 10:15 AM
Playing off your opening summary, I feel very strongly that after the Titans wantonly attempt to break Superman out from Lex' clutches, they ALL need to be **broken** *in*! INTO Wanton! Horny! Submissive! **COCK**! Craving! Bottom! Slut! Whore! Cum! Guzzling! Bitches!!! Of course, since all the Titan bois you've introduced so far are gay sluts already, it shouldn't take Lex & crew too much to turn the young superheroes into the BITCHED TRAMPS their elder mentor superhero idols SupaSlut & BatSlut are now. Oh, it may take some scientific, chemical, and mystical intervention, along with superior dom personalities like Lex, Rico, Python, etc... but those young studs ass-pussies & throat-ginas are gonna get proper training ASAP! Please! And to think, maybe the one to get bitched the most will be Tim. Least ways as long as he can morph into any man; be he superhero or everyday Joe, lol. Unthinkable! Lex wanting Rico to bitch him... temporarily. The billionaire is bloody bonkers if he doesn't realize how foolish that could be! Ciao, SuperKinkyDude! 😀😁😉😛😜😝I

12/7/22, 2:40 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Good Morning ZAI, my friend!! THANKS 4 ALL the thoughts/comments/positive feedback!!:pray: I'm humbled & filled with GRATITUDE!! Whoa, boy, you can be sure that there will be MANY curveballs:baseball: as well as some "signature twists-n-turns" coming SOON!! :cartwheeling: FYI...there might be MORE dialogue than SEX in a couple of the upcoming chapters, so that there is a "proper setup/outline" of how either Lex (or the TITANS) execute (or counterdefense) their respective plans, but rest assured, there'll be PAYOFFS "left/right/center (& sideways)":smiling_imp: AND BTW...I introduced the whole idea of Lex "wanting 2 be bitched out" by Rico 4 a myriad of reasons....it's the first time he shows ANY sort of weakness...bloody bonkers & perhaps foolish you say, but he's revealing "his own personal kink".....so we'll see how it ALL plays out....:smirk_cat: Thanks again 4 the comments/positivity/interest-- GR8FUL 4 your time & inspiration! Have a BEAUTIFUL Day, my friend!:rainbow:
Zai
12/7/22, 8:51 AM
Ffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuccccckkkkkkkkk... That damn arena must be utterly sperminated with copious loads of jizzy-jizz-juice sprayed absolutely everywhere by the entirety of the villains & dudes watching the dominant display of Lex Luthor completely **Bitch'in** the once mighty Man of Steel! *Whew...* that was one loooonnnggg ass(fucked) sentence, lol! There's been so much kink and dominance written so far, it's rather a quandary to choose which chapter has had the most. Kink is up for grabs, but this chapter is vying for most cum-tac-u-lar displays of top dawg owning his bitch dom behaviour read, yet! And nearly usurping Lex for King-dom aggression was Rico, who finally toppled any sort of toppy-type feels from little cub (reporter), Jimmy 'the boi-bitch' Olsen! That Latin stud put the sub in submissive when he plowed, pounded AND pulverized Jimmy into a picture perfect little cock & cum crazed lil' faggot queered slut. What a show Lex & Rico gave their audience AND each other, huh??? Lex certainly enjoined watching and hearing his *sub*ordinate put the screws into the wannabe boi-top-dom, huh??? I absolutely enjoyed Jimmy finally getting a proper bitching... annnddd that it was done by a very angry, very vexed, and very dominant Rico who decimated Superman's pal Jimmy was sweet as the sweetest honey, ever! Great & powerful writing my friend! Ciao & Cheers, SuperDude! 🥂🍾🔧👅💙🖤💚👏🏼👌🏼👍🏻

12/7/22, 2:27 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI! LMAO....all about the "jizzy-jizz juice":stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THAT is a CLASSIC Z-term!:boom: YEAH...THANK YOU 4 the sincere appreciation & positive comments as this chapter was a "challenging, yet extremely satisfying" one....in that it was ALL about the balance of Lex keeping himself IN CHARGE, while really pissing off Rico, who ended taking his anger/frustration out on Jimmy (in a rigorously dominating way, of course)!!:smiling_imp: The "BIG BONUS" from this chapter was the "XXXTRA-added payoff" Lex received from watching/voyeuring Rico supremely dom Jimmy:zany_face: Many THANKS & Much GRATITUDE, my friend-- Have an AWESOME day!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Anonymous
12/7/22, 3:37 AM
this is fantastic! if you'd believe it, it was exactly the kind of thing i've been looking for for a while. your writing style is excellent as well. i completely understand if you don't write more, but if you do you will absolutely have an audience

12/7/22, 2:21 PM
@Anonymous Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. Again, I'm not sure if I have another story in me, it's not a matter of not wanting to write again, it's more about having the idea I think worthwhile and the drive to follow through. At the very least I can be happy that I've written at least one story that people enjoy.