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Zai
12/7/22, 10:15 AM
Playing off your opening summary, I feel very strongly that after the Titans wantonly attempt to break Superman out from Lex' clutches, they ALL need to be **broken** *in*! INTO Wanton! Horny! Submissive! **COCK**! Craving! Bottom! Slut! Whore! Cum! Guzzling! Bitches!!! Of course, since all the Titan bois you've introduced so far are gay sluts already, it shouldn't take Lex & crew too much to turn the young superheroes into the BITCHED TRAMPS their elder mentor superhero idols SupaSlut & BatSlut are now. Oh, it may take some scientific, chemical, and mystical intervention, along with superior dom personalities like Lex, Rico, Python, etc... but those young studs ass-pussies & throat-ginas are gonna get proper training ASAP! Please! And to think, maybe the one to get bitched the most will be Tim. Least ways as long as he can morph into any man; be he superhero or everyday Joe, lol. Unthinkable! Lex wanting Rico to bitch him... temporarily. The billionaire is bloody bonkers if he doesn't realize how foolish that could be! Ciao, SuperKinkyDude! 😀😁😉😛😜😝I

12/7/22, 2:40 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Good Morning ZAI, my friend!! THANKS 4 ALL the thoughts/comments/positive feedback!!:pray: I'm humbled & filled with GRATITUDE!! Whoa, boy, you can be sure that there will be MANY curveballs:baseball: as well as some "signature twists-n-turns" coming SOON!! :cartwheeling: FYI...there might be MORE dialogue than SEX in a couple of the upcoming chapters, so that there is a "proper setup/outline" of how either Lex (or the TITANS) execute (or counterdefense) their respective plans, but rest assured, there'll be PAYOFFS "left/right/center (& sideways)":smiling_imp: AND BTW...I introduced the whole idea of Lex "wanting 2 be bitched out" by Rico 4 a myriad of reasons....it's the first time he shows ANY sort of weakness...bloody bonkers & perhaps foolish you say, but he's revealing "his own personal kink".....so we'll see how it ALL plays out....:smirk_cat: Thanks again 4 the comments/positivity/interest-- GR8FUL 4 your time & inspiration! Have a BEAUTIFUL Day, my friend!:rainbow:
Zai
12/7/22, 8:51 AM
Ffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuccccckkkkkkkkk... That damn arena must be utterly sperminated with copious loads of jizzy-jizz-juice sprayed absolutely everywhere by the entirety of the villains & dudes watching the dominant display of Lex Luthor completely **Bitch'in** the once mighty Man of Steel! *Whew...* that was one loooonnnggg ass(fucked) sentence, lol! There's been so much kink and dominance written so far, it's rather a quandary to choose which chapter has had the most. Kink is up for grabs, but this chapter is vying for most cum-tac-u-lar displays of top dawg owning his bitch dom behaviour read, yet! And nearly usurping Lex for King-dom aggression was Rico, who finally toppled any sort of toppy-type feels from little cub (reporter), Jimmy 'the boi-bitch' Olsen! That Latin stud put the sub in submissive when he plowed, pounded AND pulverized Jimmy into a picture perfect little cock & cum crazed lil' faggot queered slut. What a show Lex & Rico gave their audience AND each other, huh??? Lex certainly enjoined watching and hearing his *sub*ordinate put the screws into the wannabe boi-top-dom, huh??? I absolutely enjoyed Jimmy finally getting a proper bitching... annnddd that it was done by a very angry, very vexed, and very dominant Rico who decimated Superman's pal Jimmy was sweet as the sweetest honey, ever! Great & powerful writing my friend! Ciao & Cheers, SuperDude! 🥂🍾🔧👅💙🖤💚👏🏼👌🏼👍🏻

12/7/22, 2:27 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI! LMAO....all about the "jizzy-jizz juice":stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THAT is a CLASSIC Z-term!:boom: YEAH...THANK YOU 4 the sincere appreciation & positive comments as this chapter was a "challenging, yet extremely satisfying" one....in that it was ALL about the balance of Lex keeping himself IN CHARGE, while really pissing off Rico, who ended taking his anger/frustration out on Jimmy (in a rigorously dominating way, of course)!!:smiling_imp: The "BIG BONUS" from this chapter was the "XXXTRA-added payoff" Lex received from watching/voyeuring Rico supremely dom Jimmy:zany_face: Many THANKS & Much GRATITUDE, my friend-- Have an AWESOME day!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Anonymous
12/7/22, 3:37 AM
this is fantastic! if you'd believe it, it was exactly the kind of thing i've been looking for for a while. your writing style is excellent as well. i completely understand if you don't write more, but if you do you will absolutely have an audience

12/7/22, 2:21 PM
@Anonymous Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. Again, I'm not sure if I have another story in me, it's not a matter of not wanting to write again, it's more about having the idea I think worthwhile and the drive to follow through. At the very least I can be happy that I've written at least one story that people enjoy.
Zai
12/7/22, 7:06 AM
**Cue Dramatic Music** 🎶Dun, Dun, Duuuuunnnnn...🎶 That... was a lot of dialogue betwixt Rico & Hugo, aka the Latin Torpedo & Dr. Strange-L♥️ve. You wrote it very well, with a very dramatic climatic resolution. I'd state with utter certainty that both participants gained from their intensive discussion; cumming to definitive answers. First, Rico gained back his memories and another notch on his figurative bedpost *Whoo-hah*, and Hugo got to ride Rico's rocket into orbit. And with your dramatic cliffhanger??? Who knows CUMMMMMMMMMM what may, huh? Why you do, SuperLex, lol! Later, Buddy! 🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀

12/7/22, 2:21 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Good Morning ZAI!:sun_with_face: THANKS 4 ALL the positive comments......So glad U enjoyed this chapter as well!! As you mention, the dialogue was key to "help unlock Rico's memory block" PLUS show/display how the Professor was "getting his own just desserts" as well...a "somewhat payback 4 himself" & perhaps a payback/retribution to Lex??!?!:money_mouth_face: AND.....You know how MUCH I :sparkling_heart: a well-hung cliffhanger!!! (LMFAO):smiling_imp: Who knows what's gonna happen NEXT?!?!? Only SUPALEX knows 4 sure!!:smirk_cat: Hehehe:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Have a SUPA day, my friend!:innocent:
Dec 6, 2022
12/7/22, 1:40 PM
Wow. So well written, and so subtly brought about even though we *know* where this is going. Thanks for sharing this little gem!
12/7/22, 10:18 AM
Always excited to see another swizz story! This was a bit surreal given I'm a therapist myself... but still a great read! You always have a great way at showcasing the mental obliviousness without making it too obvious. Would love to see some form of sequel to this if you need you could, whether that's a continuation with these two or maybe this character interacting with another therapist like Rodriguez. Cheers!
12/7/22, 8:57 AM
This story ticked a lot of my boxes, I really like to hear about superhero's changing and the "_stop justice, help criminals_" line was brilliant. I do agree maybe his name should have been changed to "_**Criminal Boy**_", like others have said, i would really like to see a follow up. Thanks for writing it
12/7/22, 8:30 AM
Oblivious himbo father/exploratory son incest? How could I have known I’d love this so much? And of course, I love the amount of cum, too—always my favourite kink. Looking forward to more!
12/7/22, 8:24 AM
Intriguing beginning! I love the creativity with the lovers’ chocolates, and I’m curious things will go with Dan…
12/7/22, 8:04 AM
Well, what can I say - that was just incredible! I've always loved your stories, Swizz and Edlam and this didn't disappoint, checking all of my boxes for oblivious change, hypno and sharp suits. Like Bostonhypno, I nutted at the undressing scene and had to come back for more. Superb!