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12/7/22, 6:34 PM
*Masterful*. But dearies, don't *ever* try that at home. Whew.

12/8/22, 1:32 AM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) in the major motion picture adaptation, all driving will be performed by professional stuntmen who are on PrEP and have a clean STI panel. Rest assured!
Andrea
12/8/22, 12:28 AM
Wow, fantastic
12/7/22, 10:39 PM
Wonderful story! It has that perverse wholesomeness that I love so much. Also tiddies :grin:

12/7/22, 10:41 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) As we all know hunky tiddies are extremely important for good storycraft 😌
Anonymous
12/7/22, 7:15 PM
Absolutely loved this story! Great premise, the writing was fantastic, and it was just a really fun story.

12/7/22, 10:37 PM
@Anonymous Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so glad you liked it!
Sebastián Apollo
12/7/22, 10:21 PM
How lucky is Teddy that he has such a loving big bro in Brock! 🥰

12/7/22, 10:37 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) The luckiest boy in the world 🥰
12/7/22, 10:34 PM
Another great story thanks
12/7/22, 8:31 PM
Great story love where its going now with Paul in it I can see Paul outsmarting Dan and having the 2 of them at his mercy keep it going it's a very hot story
HungryforSanta
12/7/22, 8:22 PM
What a hot story! I wish I could be kidnapped by Nick just like Sean... Or should I say Seamus so I could be made mindless and helpless while being transformed into a balding bearded bear unable to remember anything besides devotion to Nick willing to do anything for him while craving his touch and body... If only
12/7/22, 2:43 AM
Oh my, my, my! what a rush! It's terribly well written, insanely hot and deliciously long! I LOVE IT!! Both the mental and physical transformations are great, this story it's definitely a new favorite of mine. I would have liked a description of Justice Man's uniform, because I loved the detail of how his uniform becomes progressively bigger and baggier as his body turns scrawnier, but again, that's just one small petty thing. The detail of being renamed as Justice Bitch is great, as well is to have him correcting others for saying his demeaning new name right. I don't know why I love that, maybe it's because it's a way to alter, distort and corrupt someone's identity without completely replacing it. I second to @darkblade2814 's comment, I'd love to read a sequel or a spin off exploring different changes in the heroes you mentioned, Mighty Mammoth, Stretch, and Black Diamond, I'm sure Dr. Bedlam has a previous version of his Oppositron hidden somewhere else, along with a suculent new story waiting to be told.

12/7/22, 7:12 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) I’m glad you liked it. I left space for a sequel and have a general premise for it, but I’m not sure if I’ll follow through. My rough outline is Justice Bitch rescues Dr. Bedlam from the hero jail, and Dr. Bedlam has a series of gadgets that Justice Bitch uses to subdue the heroes. The end would be Justice Bitch subduing the hero he formerly sidekicked for. I don’t have much beyond that.

12/7/22, 5:34 PM
@[The Influencer](/user/show/777056) Sounds perfect to me! It's a natural way to close Justice Bitch character's arc of corruption, and a great way to finish the story. You could split it in two or more chapters to give all the characters a propper time to change according to your likes. I'll be anxiously waiting for it!
Jim
12/7/22, 4:35 PM
Dude, you gonna finish this???