Recent Comments

12/6/22, 10:42 AM
Great story! The transformations were very hot!
12/6/22, 10:27 AM
Great descriptions of the transformations.
Swizz
12/6/22, 2:42 AM
Glad you guys like the story! :grin:

Anonymous
12/6/22, 9:18 AM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) It was an amazingly written story, you two created quite the hot stuff
12/6/22, 9:16 AM
This was an amazing story, it feels like u complement each other harmoniously, it’s hard to believe it was the work of two different authors. Will be waiting for those other collars u are working on!
12/6/22, 8:58 AM
It's good to see you posting here, (used to follow you on your wordpress profile) maybe not for everyone, But for it ticks the right boxes for me
12/6/22, 8:23 AM
Jack, you have a gift. It is as a storyteller. Few people have it. Some of those gifted writers have it easy but most work hard. I don't know which group you belong in. What makes this story so great is the characters & how you involve them. But your genius is making it believable & wanting it to go on and not end. I sincerely hope you come back to this awesome story and continue it.
12/6/22, 8:15 AM
Realistic and hot, but personally i prefer longer stories with a little more context, and character development, and a slower build up as power shifts and the seduction deepens.
12/6/22, 7:02 AM
Just fantastic. You’ve written the level of obliviousness perfectly. I’m also more a fan of the guy being clothed and controlled and that ending didn’t disappoint. Looking forward to more collabs from you two!
12/6/22, 6:14 AM
Holy cow!!! That was absolutely incredible. My hat is off to you gents!
Anonymous
12/6/22, 5:13 AM
Epic