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12/6/22, 12:26 AM
i love a scientific approach to TF

12/6/22, 12:28 AM
Thank you! Love your stories as well. @[BigMetalHusband](/user/show/10003859)
12/5/22, 11:49 PM
Fantastic

12/5/22, 11:50 PM
Thank you! @[gotacoolname](/user/show/234002)
12/5/22, 11:38 PM
Wow this was hot. Now you got me wondering about how he got this power (always?). And the various backstories with his two roommates and other therapists.
12/5/22, 5:34 AM
Color me intrigued; definitely like the whole _American Gods_ vibe and I like the resistance Yates puts up against Erame. I would like to see how Erame's power has made Yates better, stronger, and faster. Hopefully that will appear in the next episode.

12/5/22, 7:38 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) I haven't read American Gods but I will take that as a good thing. And yes Yates isn't going to just given in and while he'll stay how his abilities have been upgraded I'm not sure how much will be shown as I'm not interested in writing combat or the missions themselves but we'll see.

12/5/22, 10:35 PM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) I was actually referring to the show, but you do bring up the point of reading Neil Gaiman in writing. But I do get the vibes of the dynamic between Shadow Moon and Mr. Wednesday in Yates and Erame. As to showing how Yates has leveled up, you don't have to confine it to missions or combat; you could easily show a training session where he's starting to leave the other team members behind or running a shooting course and hitting every mark with near-perfect shots.

12/5/22, 11:24 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) I haven't watched the show either (forgot there even was one) And those would work how to show Yates has become better, just need to make sure I have an interesting way to work them into the story.
12/5/22, 11:20 PM
This is really hot. The absolute horror he feels is such a turn on.
12/5/22, 10:48 PM
Always a blast!!!

12/5/22, 11:13 PM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Literally, I hope 🍆😝
12/5/22, 11:09 PM
Is it possible to dumb them down to a primal caveman/Tarzan state of mind and then even further into apes. They are naked already, is not a big step now. Would love to read how he tries to rationalize from his pov that needs to crouch down and ook xD

12/5/22, 11:13 PM
@[MindlessDog](/user/show/10009228) I'm afraid that's not in the story!
Dec 4, 2022
12/5/22, 10:24 PM
Cool this would almost also work for the occult challenge that's coming up. I actually was worried that the protagonist was going to be locked in chastity against his will and made to be the submissive to his friend who was going to get the muscle transformation. That just wouldn't have worked for me.

12/5/22, 10:34 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) That idea never even crossed my mind :laughing: A bit too dark for my brand.

12/5/22, 10:35 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I wasn't quite sure why you had anybody in chastity since it really didn't come up other than as an aside, until we met the minotaur's mate. It does sort of imply that there's some copying of that though I suppose only consensually.

12/5/22, 10:41 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Agree, definitely my weakest tag, but I just like the idea of a divine gift of a chastity that is just completely glossed over :laughing: Some of them are in chastity and that's fine with everybody
12/5/22, 10:31 PM
Gives new meaning to the phrase: "Cum your brains out." This was VERY hot. I came right along with him after he (we) heard CUM CUM CUM!
12/5/22, 10:13 PM
You are full of surprises. I had forgotten that Sean was on the table in the basement. This chapter was awesome. We are spoiled by you.