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12/5/22, 9:20 PM
This is what I’m here for. Absolutely fantastic and smoking hot.
12/5/22, 8:46 PM
Wow. Christmas has come early. Excellent as expected given past work by both of you. Level of detail here and rationalizations were so good. Excited to see what you two have planned next.
12/5/22, 7:43 PM
Holy. Freakin. Hell.
12/5/22, 7:33 PM
Thank you Swizz and EdIam! You guys won’t believe how surprised I was when I saw this collab. Love it in every way and looking forward to other stories, as always :)
12/4/22, 11:21 PM
What a fun first entry! I’ve gotta say that I’m leaning towards intensely disliking Bellamy, and am sliiiiighly suspicious of Alex’s bona fides after letting him get so out of sorts so quickly, but those are minor quibbles. The sex was hot, the manipulation is believable, and I’m very interested to see the further softening of Bellamy’s edges to the point that the romance/Cupid aspect kicks in. I’d also love for Alex to have a genuinely positive impact on Bellamy, because I am biased towards wholesomeness. I’ll definitely read the next instalment once it’s up!

Sebastián Apollo
12/5/22, 7:21 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) No! Not Bellamy! 😭 That's curious because, as mentioned previously, I had to do a near total rewrite of all of Bellamy's dialogue and character to make him a lot more tolerable and likeable. He's supposed to be bratty, immature, and self-centered, sure, but there's also some light cracking through. Maybe the second chapter might change your tune... The aspect of Alex's bona fides is also an interesting one. It's a difficult balance of both realism and fantasy - if Alex actually DID his job, then they never would've gone to the party. Which may have brought us to another story thread with the same outcome, but the idea of the party involved multiple facets that will come up in future chapters. Glad to hear you enjoyed the sex scenes though - I'll be honest, as ridiculous as this may sound, sex scenes were never my forte. I always kind of _cringe_ when I read mine after writing them. And I don't know if that's indicative of actual quality, or it's because I'm just never satisfied with how my final product turns out. Chapter two is in the editing stage and should be coming out soon, stay tuned!

12/5/22, 7:28 PM
Aw, don’t let me bum you out, @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)! Just means you did a good job at making Bellamy bratty just like you wanted. There is some light shining through, and that’s what makes me interested to see where it goes from here. I can tell you’re gearing up for real character development and a thoughtful story. As for Alex, I realize you had a tough needle to thread. For my money, as described by Bellamy’s father, his job is to be a bodyguard, but that means going where the client goes and doing your best within that context. So it didn’t strike me as weird that they went to the party; I was just surprised that he was so inept at handling crowds or fading into the background. But, there was already an air of unreality at KOK that maybe something ‘artificial’ was going on that conspired to undermine him? At any rate, as I said, minor quibble. You did good work!
12/3/22, 8:48 AM
Kevin needs to have the tables turned on him. Hot story! The changes were great!

12/5/22, 7:12 PM
Maybe @[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171), but who'd dare to try? I think Kevin's in the drivers seat for a while.
12/5/22, 6:32 PM
Thanks.Love the thunderstorm comment; made my day.
12/5/22, 5:54 PM
Sorry I haven't commented on this before, I've read this on Telemachus but I just stumbled across it here today. I have to tell you I really enjoyed it. You did great work with the concept. The ending author's note actually stayed with me for weeks, and when I was sitting in bed late a night during a thunder storm the thought "that's Thor getting hammered" crossed my mind.
12/5/22, 5:37 PM
Hey friends!!! Been working hard on collabs with Swizz over the last few months and this is our first completed work. It’s been a joy working with someone as talented as him, as focused on details as him, and just inventive in his ideas as him. We have a couple other stories in the work too…and, as always, I’m slowly working on my own solo stuff. Hope you all enjoy!!!
WannabeSlut
8/29/22, 11:30 AM
Love the story and development. Wish there was a sequel series of them at Eden or even after.

12/5/22, 5:19 PM
@WannabeSlut Agree!