Recent Comments

12/5/22, 6:02 AM
Great idea. And great execution. There's so much bubbling beneath the surface here too. Already Red has got a new convert on the way. Thank you for writing, this was both hot and fun to read.
Anonymous
12/4/22, 8:47 PM
Such an amazing story, Derek! Thanks for this master piece!

12/5/22, 5:49 AM
You’re very welcome!
11/30/22, 3:09 AM
I loved this!

12/5/22, 5:46 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I'm so glad you did thank you for reading 😊
12/5/22, 5:31 AM
I actually liked part two better! I'm a sucker for a plausible, satisfying solution to an impossible situation.
12/5/22, 5:06 AM
Thanks for this story. It was hot. I enjoyed the emptying of the boy, cumming out his thoughts and self to be reshaped into a person again but an obedient one like the two guys collecting him.
12/4/22, 7:28 PM
Fabulous story! One of the hottest things I've read in months. There's some great world-building here, and I hope you do expand it, because there are a lot of ways you could take this premise.

12/5/22, 5:06 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Not certain quite yet what I might do for a sequel, but I am putting some thought into it now.
Jun 12, 2022
12/5/22, 4:56 AM
You've done it again! Bravo!
Mar 13, 2021
12/5/22, 4:47 AM
My one problem with part one was that I couldn't see Steven's motive other than cruelty. Now, in revealing him as a power bottom creating his perfect submissive top, it makes sense. :-) It's been a while so, I guess there will be no more chapters. :-(
12/2/22, 10:47 AM
Very good. I like it.

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@Jonanator Thank you for sticking with us! Great to hear you're still reading and enjoying!

Jonanator
12/5/22, 4:18 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) No problem
12/3/22, 1:30 PM
Mouse deserves better. TT Rhys and Lemon are starting to question what's up with Jasper, that's good. But oh no, the other thiefs are in trouble 0_0

12/5/22, 3:14 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) <3 We are so mean to them sometimes but we love the characters so! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts -- we really appreciate it.