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11/30/22, 3:09 AM
I loved this!

12/5/22, 5:46 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I'm so glad you did thank you for reading 😊
12/5/22, 5:31 AM
I actually liked part two better! I'm a sucker for a plausible, satisfying solution to an impossible situation.
12/5/22, 5:06 AM
Thanks for this story. It was hot. I enjoyed the emptying of the boy, cumming out his thoughts and self to be reshaped into a person again but an obedient one like the two guys collecting him.
12/4/22, 7:28 PM
Fabulous story! One of the hottest things I've read in months. There's some great world-building here, and I hope you do expand it, because there are a lot of ways you could take this premise.

12/5/22, 5:06 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Not certain quite yet what I might do for a sequel, but I am putting some thought into it now.
Jun 12, 2022
12/5/22, 4:56 AM
You've done it again! Bravo!
Mar 13, 2021
12/5/22, 4:47 AM
My one problem with part one was that I couldn't see Steven's motive other than cruelty. Now, in revealing him as a power bottom creating his perfect submissive top, it makes sense. :-) It's been a while so, I guess there will be no more chapters. :-(
12/2/22, 10:47 AM
Very good. I like it.

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@Jonanator Thank you for sticking with us! Great to hear you're still reading and enjoying!

Jonanator
12/5/22, 4:18 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) No problem
12/3/22, 1:30 PM
Mouse deserves better. TT Rhys and Lemon are starting to question what's up with Jasper, that's good. But oh no, the other thiefs are in trouble 0_0

12/5/22, 3:14 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) <3 We are so mean to them sometimes but we love the characters so! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts -- we really appreciate it.
12/2/22, 7:58 AM
So, so, so excited to read the next chapter. Thank you. I have been hanging out for a new installment for a while. This was worth the wait. What a fantastic chapter. Plot is making leaps and bounds and the characters continue to grow deeper and spread their web of connection. I hope Iskios turns out to be trustworthy. It'd be so nice if they all find a place together. You know, if the group actually can get back together again after all this. There's just so much in this chapter. I'm so curious about Mouse and just what is going on there and also totally creeped out by the clear and disturbing abuse from Aris on the poor lad. I'm glad he had a fun sex scene with a bunch of other pets to start off his stay. Especially since he's an indoor pet. Rhys and Jasper are just the sweetest. I love them so much and want them to be disgustingly happy together. Even Lemon has a heart! Even though his motivations are in keeping Rhys safe and well. The Greek Play was a surprise and a great expansion of the world and the culture. Love this world and really, really need to know what happens next. No pressure or anything... but pretty please? :)

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) We're so happy to have you as our reader. Thanks again for reading through the draft. It's such a delight to hear your thoughts!
Mar 13, 2018
12/5/22, 3:13 AM
This story definitely deserves its spot as one of the top stories on the site. Splitting the characters up adds a great psychological isolation for each of the POV characters. The characters trying to resist the brainwashing is incredibly hot, and while its obviously doomed to fail due to genre, it's drawn out long enough that the reader can sink his teeth into the eroticism of each scenario. There are just enough scenes that the gimmick doesn't get tired out and overstay its welcome.