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1/6/23, 6:55 PM
This is so well done! I am incredibly impressed with how you keep all these plates spinning but maintain such tense dynamics all around. The Dick/Bruce/Rico/Connor stuff is just incredibly hot. And then having B/T and Superman fighting over Lex is brilliant. My compliments to HH the man knows what he's doing ;)

1/6/23, 7:41 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Happy TGIF Fanboi!! I'm SO relieved 2 receive your positive comments!!:hugs: I will admit that these "HYPNO-chapters" have taken addt'l time for me to tweak/hone/heighten "ALL the right/proper aspects" of the story:monocle_face: I sincerely THANK YOU (from the bottom of my :heartpulse:!) 4 acknowledging "my plate-spinnin abilities"....LMAO!!:rofl: I'm gonna work on CH. 42 over the weekend & see if I can keep things FRESH/INTENSE/SEXY/EXCITING!!:boom: You made my day, kind Sir!!:raised_hands: Have an AWESOME weekend!!:supervillain:
1/6/23, 7:31 PM
Mmmmm I need a doctor like this 🤤
Swizz
1/6/23, 5:32 PM
I wanted to try and read this story but I just can't. The paragraphs are too big, the sentences too unwieldy, and my attention span too short. Maybe break things up a bit more next time. A 500+ word paragraph with a total of three sentences is just too difficult to digest for something that's supposed to be erotic. You may want to try copy/pasting your stories into this website for some feedback on the readability: https://hemingwayapp.com/

1/6/23, 5:35 PM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) Thanks for the feedback, I'll give that link a look and edit the story to break it up a little bit more.

1/6/23, 6:52 PM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) Tried Hemingway and edited the story, hope it's more readable now. Again, thanks for the feedback.
Jun 8, 2021
1/6/23, 6:30 PM
Amazing story! So hot 🥵
1/6/23, 5:49 PM
I like the sinister undercurrent in this story. How many more boys are out there that didn't want to be ... changed :grin:

1/6/23, 6:17 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I imagine the factions have some sort of system worked out to divvy up the virgins and vanilla gays who wander into their honey trap. No doubt there are other diaper boys like Colton, just the same as there are some less-than-voluntary pups, gimps, slaves etc.
1/6/23, 10:39 AM
Who's that Pokemon? It's Stockholm syndrome! But in all honesty, I would've expected that Colton will put a little more resistance at this stage, at least at the beginning before the messing part. Especially when he found out that Roy is part of the reason he was abducted. I also hope that Turner got more than just spanking, for example, having his medical license revoked (he is, after all, a danger to his patients). Having said that, Roy's care and empathy were sweet and José has instantly become one of my favorites. I don't think that this story would've awaken such strong feelings if it wasn't written so well, so while it might seem counter intuitive, do take this as a compliment. I was genuinely disappointed when I read that chapters will not come out daily and I was absolutely delighted when I woke up and saw there's a new one after all. I also like that this area is part of a larger city with every district having a different kink. It gives the sense of this city being a complete world on its own. And finally, while I know it won't turn out this way, I am still #TeamBrett, with José making a lot of appearances. Can't wait for the next chapter!

1/6/23, 5:24 PM
@Reader I will definitely take it as a compliment that I’ve got you hooked and waiting for the next chapter! I felt like I needed to get the romance part moving along the resistance part was threatening to become repetitive and if I’ve left the reader wanting more, perhaps it means I am shifting the tone in time to avert that. Stockholm Syndrome? There’s probably a bit of that mixed in with the out and out mental conditioning that poor Colton received during Narrator. He’s certainly been softened up towards being a diaper boy and accepting being daddied, though I’ll grant that it’s on the subtler side of the mind control spectrum. I never go for the total personality eradication stuff, it’s just too dark for me outside of a drone story. Glad you’re enjoying it. Will try to drop another chapter this weekend.
1/6/23, 4:23 PM
Im speedrunning reading this story and my god this is the perfect combination of brainwashing and sweet and fluff love story. This story is very sexy and sensual.
RC_Willy
1/6/23, 5:08 AM
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peachy
1/6/23, 3:20 PM
@[RC_Willy](/user/show/10023548) thank you!
1/6/23, 2:22 PM
Well there you have them, the 12 Chapters for the 12 days of Christmas. I will continue the story but I’m now back at work so this won’t be as frequent. It has been hard to keep the pace up but I’m glad I achieved it. I hope you enjoy the future chapters as I post them.
Anonymous
1/6/23, 11:03 AM
Says here not hear