Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/3/22, 5:53 AM
It was defo worth the wait .I loved it

12/5/22, 12:50 AM
@Anonymous Thanks!
12/4/22, 10:35 PM
Incredible. Coincidences sure are fun. Loved the unintentional aspect of the events while also leading to a lot of enjoyment. The variety and the descriptions were magnificent.

12/5/22, 12:47 AM
Thank you for the feedback, @[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763). “Unintentional” is basically Ethan’s middle name.
Anonymous
12/4/22, 10:59 PM
Very creative story. Intensely erotic, sensual, arousing. Cum control aspect was beautifully written … “every nerve ending exploding”! I can’t wait to read the story involving cigars!
Sebastián Apollo
12/4/22, 10:28 PM
I concur with the other two commenters, I love this premise of this Minotaur Cult masquerading as a gym to outsiders and I think it could go in some really interesting directions, should you choose to continue it. Very well done!
12/4/22, 9:22 PM
Oh i loved this one! I truelly hate clowns... but somehow you turned it into a very hot story! I dont agree with the comments above... i think its detailed enough. But yes. I do agree that it would be hot to see another chapters with Dave in it.
12/4/22, 7:56 PM
I can’t wait to read more!

12/4/22, 8:39 PM
Thank you! @[Behr](/user/show/1886592)
12/4/22, 8:30 PM
I love the novel road to climax here, just twitching around and inside one another in a feedback loop. Plus the idea that their insides are turning into a generalized erogenous zone as they change to accommodate new life. Eager to see where this goes next!
12/4/22, 5:49 PM
I enjoyed this one, I hope we can see a part 2
musclejunkie
12/4/22, 1:45 AM
I'm super confused. What just happened? was it a nightmare? What happened to his chest? Were his parents there looking for him? I feel like you intentionally created multiple paths to take with the story's writing but teased them with no explanation. It needs a lot of clarification, though I enjoy the style of it and how you wrote it out, it feels like I read your brainstorming vs. a finished product.

12/4/22, 1:52 PM
@[musclejunkie](/user/show/10019676) It is chaotic and disjointed because his mind is broken. No matter what you and I believe, for him all these events are real. They happened and will assimilate in his brain as memories, affecting his actions and loyalties.

12/4/22, 4:33 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) realy hot he will make a good Muslim slave fuck wish I had hypnofiles for slave like that would be hot
12/4/22, 4:29 PM
Great as usual. eager for more