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12/4/22, 5:49 PM
I enjoyed this one, I hope we can see a part 2
musclejunkie
12/4/22, 1:45 AM
I'm super confused. What just happened? was it a nightmare? What happened to his chest? Were his parents there looking for him? I feel like you intentionally created multiple paths to take with the story's writing but teased them with no explanation. It needs a lot of clarification, though I enjoy the style of it and how you wrote it out, it feels like I read your brainstorming vs. a finished product.

12/4/22, 1:52 PM
@[musclejunkie](/user/show/10019676) It is chaotic and disjointed because his mind is broken. No matter what you and I believe, for him all these events are real. They happened and will assimilate in his brain as memories, affecting his actions and loyalties.

12/4/22, 4:33 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) realy hot he will make a good Muslim slave fuck wish I had hypnofiles for slave like that would be hot
12/4/22, 4:29 PM
Great as usual. eager for more
12/4/22, 4:27 PM
Aaaaaand, I’m caught up. Geez, poor Luke. Will he ever get control of his life back? You did an amazing job of describing how he processed the physical sensations of his need and getting fucked. So hot. And I’m glad he’s coming to terms with his new reality!
12/4/22, 4:09 PM
The relationships really sell this story for me, on top of the eroticism. I want to echo some of the misgivings raised by Feed Your Head above — part of me definitely raised an eyebrow at the racial stereotypes employed, and was a little icked out at the implications of non-con and power imbalance, plus the tension between a character who’s got a real impediment to understanding his reality and what’s just happening _at_ him because of his biology. All of which is to say, it made me feel things, and I’m still hopeful this will have a happy ending for all involved. (And more explorations of Luke’s itch, of course, because it remains an incredibly hot execution of an incredibly hot concept.)
12/4/22, 2:56 PM
Very very hot.
Dec 4, 2022
12/4/22, 2:38 PM
Wonderful tale, the idea of everyone being corrupted by milk is so deliciously erotic when you find out who it belongs to 😋

12/4/22, 2:48 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Much better than draft number one, eh? :grin:
Dec 4, 2022
12/4/22, 1:12 AM
Bois need to drink their milk and dad's should make sure to help them out! Loved the slow burn, the foreshadowing and Minotaur Milk sounds like a product we need. :relieved: Another great entry into the Norismoverse.

12/4/22, 2:47 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you so much for helping me :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
12/4/22, 2:40 PM
This chapter is so heartbreaking! I just want to reach through the screen and give both Sammy and Luke a shake and tell them why they’re miscommunicating. But I like how it’s apparent they’re moving past the part where we could see Luke as being used or taken advantage of, and of course it’s still incredibly hot. Can’t wait to read more.
12/4/22, 2:01 PM
The actual writing is really good. Yeah, you're right I'm rooting for kamay to return to himself. So, for me the sex isn't sex. It's just cruel.