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Musclewannabe
2/17/20, 10:09 AM
2020 and this story still is one of my all time favorite!

Anonymous
12/4/22, 4:44 AM
@Musclewannabe Great to see a big fan like me.
Anonymous
12/4/22, 12:20 AM
I'm not sure what the etiquette around commenting on older posts is but I returned to this story after finding it in my Favorites menu and I have to say that I find it absolutely stunning there are no comments on this story. It is absolutely without question the best version of the demon summoning trope I've ever read. It has such memorable characterization and really clever usage of mechanics. I think the degree of whimsy is totally refreshing and original, and it really is just a pinnacle in the genre on this site. Thank you so much for posting it and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

12/4/22, 3:03 AM
@Anonymous I was looking at recent comments and saw this. I wonder of there's a glitch hiding other comments on the story for you? Maybe something to do with it being a contest entry? And I agree -- this is one of the best demon summoning stories on the site. (Inspired me to start writing my own stuff). I think most authors appreciate comments on old stories! Nice to know people are still reading.
12/4/22, 2:22 AM
Woof! Crazy good.
12/4/22, 2:19 AM
You have such a great command of this story, from characterization to sex scenes to just articulating the sensation of the needy itch and the buildup to orgasm… it’s excellent. As a consequence of your characterization, I’m *really* feeling for Luke in terms of him being on the spectrum and otherwise struggling to piece together what’s going on around him. I’m not on the spectrum myself, but I struggled big time with socialization and a learning disability when I was growing up, so a lot of what you wrote hits home for me. I really hope Sam spells it out for him soon so he can get on with processing his social reality as well as dealing with whatever’s going on with his ass. Suffice to say I will absolutely be reading the rest of this series!
12/4/22, 12:38 AM
wered thigbn is guys convertting to islam has tuned me on a lot lately want to have a harem of Muslim men
12/3/22, 6:00 PM
love to see lex have this dominance over superslave

12/4/22, 12:07 AM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) Hey CuriousJ! Glad U R enjoying the storyline!!:sparkler: I told U if U were patient that the story would go in the direction that you desired (wink-wink)!!:smiling_imp: Stay tuned 4 more curveballs (& twists & turns, for that matter--LOL!):baseball: Gr8ful 4 your positive feedback & continued interest! ENJOY your weekend!:sparkles:
12/3/22, 11:15 PM
Ooohh, so exciting. Things got hotter with the student teacher dynamic. I wonder how will Cameron blends/interact with the other two "slaves". Looking forward with the next chapter.
12/3/22, 9:13 PM
I loved the original JPS, and this is a really nice reboot. Super hot, and it really hits a number of my kink buttons perfectly! One comment with your writing, sometimes it’s a little unclear. Like, does he have carpet in his bathroom, or did he head back to his bedroom? Did he have two or three fingers in his ass when Sammy found him? A little more attention to the details will help readers like me stay in the story and not get distracted trying to copy-edit on the fly 😅

12/3/22, 9:57 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Very fair. I do have a few proofreaders who take care of things for me, but sometimes things fall through the cracks.
Sebastián Apollo
12/3/22, 5:38 AM
Charlie, you have no idea how much of a genuine joy it is to see the next chapter of Luke's adventure get uploaded! I actually originally starting following you on Literotica, then I found you on Twitter, and that led me to GayKinkyStories, so I suppose I owe you thanks for introducing me to such a great site and offering of erotica. Greatly written, balancing both comedic tones and sexiness. Luke's almost-aloofness is both adorable, endearing, and his casual sluttiness about the entire ordeal is hot as hell. Watching a young baseball stud slowly degrade himself into a living self-lubing fleshlight has only brought the perviest of smiles to my face! Sammy is a sweetheart, and Mark was a fun ride! Keep up the good work!

12/3/22, 9:56 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thank you so much! I'm a big fan of your writing too!! And I'm honored you discovered this site through me :) I'm glad you are liking the non-porn elements too, that always makes me happy to hear.
12/3/22, 5:42 AM
Wow. I think I just discovered a kink for men with strong moral principles. I'm crushing hard for coach after this and he didn't even have to take his clothes off lol. Great chapter, happy to see some new characters in the doctor and the nurse :)

12/3/22, 9:55 PM
@[AdibHass](/user/show/910212) Well there's only so long a man of fine moral character like Coach can resist the sultry charms of Luke's ass :)