Recent Comments

Sebastián Apollo
12/4/22, 10:28 PM
I concur with the other two commenters, I love this premise of this Minotaur Cult masquerading as a gym to outsiders and I think it could go in some really interesting directions, should you choose to continue it. Very well done!
12/4/22, 9:22 PM
Oh i loved this one! I truelly hate clowns... but somehow you turned it into a very hot story! I dont agree with the comments above... i think its detailed enough. But yes. I do agree that it would be hot to see another chapters with Dave in it.
12/4/22, 7:56 PM
I can’t wait to read more!

12/4/22, 8:39 PM
Thank you! @[Behr](/user/show/1886592)
12/4/22, 8:30 PM
I love the novel road to climax here, just twitching around and inside one another in a feedback loop. Plus the idea that their insides are turning into a generalized erogenous zone as they change to accommodate new life. Eager to see where this goes next!
12/4/22, 5:49 PM
I enjoyed this one, I hope we can see a part 2
musclejunkie
12/4/22, 1:45 AM
I'm super confused. What just happened? was it a nightmare? What happened to his chest? Were his parents there looking for him? I feel like you intentionally created multiple paths to take with the story's writing but teased them with no explanation. It needs a lot of clarification, though I enjoy the style of it and how you wrote it out, it feels like I read your brainstorming vs. a finished product.

12/4/22, 1:52 PM
@[musclejunkie](/user/show/10019676) It is chaotic and disjointed because his mind is broken. No matter what you and I believe, for him all these events are real. They happened and will assimilate in his brain as memories, affecting his actions and loyalties.

12/4/22, 4:33 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) realy hot he will make a good Muslim slave fuck wish I had hypnofiles for slave like that would be hot
12/4/22, 4:29 PM
Great as usual. eager for more
12/4/22, 4:27 PM
Aaaaaand, I’m caught up. Geez, poor Luke. Will he ever get control of his life back? You did an amazing job of describing how he processed the physical sensations of his need and getting fucked. So hot. And I’m glad he’s coming to terms with his new reality!
12/4/22, 4:09 PM
The relationships really sell this story for me, on top of the eroticism. I want to echo some of the misgivings raised by Feed Your Head above — part of me definitely raised an eyebrow at the racial stereotypes employed, and was a little icked out at the implications of non-con and power imbalance, plus the tension between a character who’s got a real impediment to understanding his reality and what’s just happening _at_ him because of his biology. All of which is to say, it made me feel things, and I’m still hopeful this will have a happy ending for all involved. (And more explorations of Luke’s itch, of course, because it remains an incredibly hot execution of an incredibly hot concept.)
12/4/22, 2:56 PM
Very very hot.