Recent Comments

12/3/22, 5:55 PM
i live to serve the virus
Dec 3, 2022
Anonymous
12/3/22, 9:53 AM
I’m a sucker for a good Superman story, so my thanks go out to whichever friend persuaded you to post this. And to you for writing it too, of course! ;) If I might offer an editing suggestion to help elevate the story… (and future stories, I hope!) Most of the story is a single wall of text, which means it all starts to blur together. Throwing in paragraph breaks would make it so much easier to read, and give some of the story beats more time to breathe.

12/3/22, 5:49 PM
@Anonymous Thank you, I will definitely keep that in mind. Formatting has always been one of those weak points for me
12/3/22, 3:19 PM
Scorchingly hot—the sex scene pulled me along so well, not to mention my investment in Beau’s travails through the club itself! Something I found really fun was the way Beau sort of leaned into Ethan’s suggestion power, using it to make himself more comfortable. Such a useful power to have!

12/3/22, 4:28 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you! Ethan as gay training wheels was fun to write around 😁
12/3/22, 3:49 PM
Can't wait to read more. Such a hot story.
12/3/22, 3:28 PM
I enjoy the creativity in this story! The sex scene with Matt was really hot, too. Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
12/3/22, 3:24 PM
I live to serve the virus
12/3/22, 12:25 PM
This story continues to be outstanding.

12/3/22, 3:15 PM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Hi Darby!! So GR8 2 hear from you & THANK YOU 4 your positive comment!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I'm THRILLED that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline...:sparkler: I'm doing my BEST 2 keep it interesting/evolving with AS MANY curveballs/twists & turns that I can create!:smiling_imp: Again, SO GR8FUL for your continued interest & ENJOY your Weekend!:sun_with_face:
12/2/22, 4:42 AM
A great series full of the normal starts and stops of developing of self and revelations of sexuality. These guys are developing well. At 18 I was still quietly j/o in my room while hating myself for it. These guys are very healthy mentally and in terms of self-knowledge.

12/3/22, 2:20 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, if they were real I'd be really happy for them. It's sort of the smooth adolescence I didn't get to have and I enjoyed writing that kind of coming of age in this story. Glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
11/28/22, 5:28 PM
We miss Joey and daddy but mostly @ediam :smiling_face_with_tear:

Vinnie
12/3/22, 2:11 PM
@Anonymous MORE HYPNO PLS
Leo
12/3/22, 1:32 PM
Please make another chapter! Love where this story is going. I hope we can have Ben become in love with Rick and propose to him! Completely moving on from his old wife and kids. It would also be hot to turn Ben into Rick’s personal butler/servant!