Recent Comments

12/3/22, 5:42 AM
Wow. I think I just discovered a kink for men with strong moral principles. I'm crushing hard for coach after this and he didn't even have to take his clothes off lol. Great chapter, happy to see some new characters in the doctor and the nurse :)

12/3/22, 9:55 PM
@[AdibHass](/user/show/910212) Well there's only so long a man of fine moral character like Coach can resist the sultry charms of Luke's ass :)
12/3/22, 8:19 PM
Really great story. Build up with excellent and the muscle worship was visceral. I don't know that I'm actually interested in Temple details but I would certainly love to see these guys fucking and have the bottoms mind getting blown by having his friends dick inside of him and his massive muscular body physically overwhelming him.
12/3/22, 7:55 PM
This was hot!
12/3/22, 5:55 PM
i live to serve the virus
Dec 3, 2022
Anonymous
12/3/22, 9:53 AM
I’m a sucker for a good Superman story, so my thanks go out to whichever friend persuaded you to post this. And to you for writing it too, of course! ;) If I might offer an editing suggestion to help elevate the story… (and future stories, I hope!) Most of the story is a single wall of text, which means it all starts to blur together. Throwing in paragraph breaks would make it so much easier to read, and give some of the story beats more time to breathe.

12/3/22, 5:49 PM
@Anonymous Thank you, I will definitely keep that in mind. Formatting has always been one of those weak points for me
12/3/22, 3:19 PM
Scorchingly hot—the sex scene pulled me along so well, not to mention my investment in Beau’s travails through the club itself! Something I found really fun was the way Beau sort of leaned into Ethan’s suggestion power, using it to make himself more comfortable. Such a useful power to have!

12/3/22, 4:28 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you! Ethan as gay training wheels was fun to write around 😁
12/3/22, 3:49 PM
Can't wait to read more. Such a hot story.
12/3/22, 3:28 PM
I enjoy the creativity in this story! The sex scene with Matt was really hot, too. Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
12/3/22, 3:24 PM
I live to serve the virus
12/3/22, 12:25 PM
This story continues to be outstanding.

12/3/22, 3:15 PM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Hi Darby!! So GR8 2 hear from you & THANK YOU 4 your positive comment!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I'm THRILLED that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline...:sparkler: I'm doing my BEST 2 keep it interesting/evolving with AS MANY curveballs/twists & turns that I can create!:smiling_imp: Again, SO GR8FUL for your continued interest & ENJOY your Weekend!:sun_with_face: