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10/20/22, 12:35 PM
Lavender Lad, thank you so much for your input. Can I ask you if would be so kind to help me with grammar?

Lavender Lad
12/2/22, 11:42 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) Sorry for the late reply! GGS doesn't always show me when someone replies to my messages Anyways moving on. both the activation and deactivation phrases are in a grammatically incorrect form the activation phrase shagalah Can be eitherشغلَwhich is male past simple form(he worked it/he activated it) or شغله which is male passive and as a word is mostly used to mean a person is engrossed in a specific task or is ruminating over a past event depending on context. Atfiah أطفيئه is imperative but the subject is not the person receiving the command, the word literally means in this case "close it" or "extinguish it". If you use a direct imperative Form(ishtaghelإشتغل and intafi'انطفئ) for these two words it would sound very unnatural in Arabic and instead the noun of these words would be used in this case tashgheel تشغيل and itfa' إطفاء (activation and deactivation) but if you want a direct imperative form i would suggest something more poetic as اشتعل ishta'el and انطفئ (become aflame and become extinguished) which would some more natural in this case but tbh i don't think anyone would care as i am probably one of the few people who speak Arabic as first language here lmao anyways good story
12/2/22, 8:52 PM
Hot. Hope more comes.
12/2/22, 8:12 PM
Since everyone's life is different so is every journey of discovery of sexuality. It's nice to just see a character figure things out rather than completely panic at the growing realization of the truth.
12/2/22, 6:48 AM
What a fantastic story! You do a great job setting up the seeds for the ending in the very beginning ("Wish for a sex slave" is one of the first things the genie says). The casual mentions of each client also hints at a whole world of possibilities (who was the old man, and what was the "tab" he owed?). And despite the undercurrent of tragedy--someone losing all free will--the ending remains oddly happy, especially with the revelation that SOME intelligence, like the ability to work a phone, remains. You hit the perfect balance in intellect loss, characters being morally gray, and a light tone with a dark undercurrent. Well done! :)

12/2/22, 7:41 PM
Thanks @[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832)! I’ll admit, I wrote the “sex slave” line just cause I thought it was funny… and then later I realized I could make it come true. As for the old man, my theory is that _someone_ has to pay for every change, and the genie is a bit of a sweetheart so he had the man “pay” for everyone having sex in the steam room by taking his old age and restoring him to youth. It was my way of showing that the genie isn’t all bad. “A light tone with a dark undercurrent” — I love that description.
12/1/22, 4:17 PM
Icon's company plan is really falling apart because of Darkweb, how delicious! Can't wait to hear about Reader though. and What's going to happen with Archie? Loved this series, i just marathoned it all! hats off to you, good sir!

12/2/22, 4:18 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) Glad you've enjoyed things so far! I hope the get the next chapter out soon, but I've been bedridden all week and I'm only just about ready to get back up to my computer. Fingers crossed that I can start soon!
12/2/22, 12:37 AM
Hot. Hope you do more.

12/2/22, 3:22 PM
@Jonanator I will! Thanks!
12/1/22, 11:37 PM
It's very difficult to deal with faith/religion and being gay. Having struggled with this myself I like your approach. The slow character development is good. It's not like Isaac is instantly gay. Very true to life!

12/2/22, 2:55 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, this was a serious struggle for me, too, and I wanted to portray some of those major steps that had to happen. Few of the characters in this story are fully as *devout* as I imagine you or I were—there’s a little bit more room for their growth, and I’m following the cues of the movie this is inspired by in giving them a sort of… looser or more flexible stance. At the same time I didn’t want them to seem absolutely flippant. It’s not perfect and a longer story might have done the struggle more justice, but I’m glad there’s still some good stuff here that you found relatable!
Zai
12/1/22, 6:24 AM
*Dude*. *SUPERDUDE*! I got some catching up on your chapters! I've been hella busy and I plan on gett'in to reading all about who's gett'in butt-reamed and dick-sucked, etc, ASAP! So noooooooo, I've not fallen off the 👨‍🚀 of the 🌏... face of the Earth, Lol! Later, Oh Spa Luver! *Cum Facials, anyone*? 😀😁😂🤣🌍🌎🌏

12/1/22, 4:43 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) CIAO ZAI!! SO GR8 2 hear from U!!:sparkler: I have 2 admit not hearing from you this week had me "somewhat concerned" (I missed ya, Dude!), but I know that LIFE sometimes gets in the way which detracts us from our "personal pleasures":smiling_imp: Hope you're ENJOYING catchin-up on the various Chapters....hit me up with your astute comments/feedback...Lookin fwd 2 it!:monocle_face: Have a SUPA Day, my friend!:innocent:

Zai
12/2/22, 5:22 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hujambo, SuperDude! Yup, I'm not locked as of right now, but I'm so damn loaded you'll probably hear my roar of release the 5000+ kilometers from my home to Miami, lol! 👅👅👅 Later, Alligator!

12/2/22, 2:04 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) LMAO!!! C&C ZAI!! Dying of laughter at the thought of being able to "hear your ROAR of release" from your home to mine...:rofl: but, it's also actually kinda HOTTT!!!:smiling_imp: (now, U have me imagining "the shooting part" of the release, too!:sweat_drops: -- you know how I get about cumshowers!:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain:) Happy TGIF, my friend-- Hope your Friday is a Productive one!:innocent:
Zai
11/23/22, 4:07 PM
🤸‍♂️🤸‍♀️🤹‍♂️🤹‍♀️ Yup, the above are the closest I've got for cheerleading. *Lol*! Yup, I'm salivating for BatFag's continued training in the fine art of... The BITCH! 🤤😝😏😋 Bruce Wayne AND Batman were born to become submissive, bottom slut whores who crave huge dicks and the cock snot they spurt! 😈👿 Happy Thanksgiving, SuperDude! 🦃🦃🦃🍗🍗🍗🍞🍞🍞🍍🍍🍍🥕🥕🥕

11/24/22, 4:12 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy Turkey Day 2 U & Yours!:turkey: I'm pretty sure that U will be pleased when U get to read Chapter 24...unfortunately, it's still awaiting approval...I was hoping that I submitted it early enough yesterday so that it would be a "FRESH ARRIVAL" 4 your reading pleasure today (after your pie/dessert!:pie:)...keeping my fingaz crossed that it will be released sometime today!!:innocent: ENJOY the day & BE THANKFUL 4 WHAT U GOT, my friend...I know I am!!:pray:

11/24/22, 4:16 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Hey ZAI! :sparkler:SPECIAL ALERT!!:sparkler:CHAPTER 24 is UP NOW!! It literally just went up as I was typing these replies 2 U....ENJOY it & Happy Gobble Gobble day!:turkey:

Zai
11/25/22, 3:01 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) CHEERS, DUDE! Fresh chapter tonight followed by fresh cream delivery *filthy wink*! That'll be my best dessert, Lol! Have lots of fun and don't eat too much... we don't want you exploding *THAT WAY... wink-wink*, now do we??? Ciao, buddy! 😀😁😂🤣😃😄😅😆😉

11/25/22, 5:11 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI! Hope U find CHAPTER 24 filled with HARD-n-CREAMY surprises!:zany_face: I just completed CHAPTER 25, which has been uploaded & is awaiting approval from the EXCELLENT GSS staff! Hope UR Gobble Gobble day in MAINE was STUFFED with GR8 Food & Good-natured FUN!🦃 ENJOY the weekend!:sunglasses:

Zai
11/26/22, 9:16 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) 24 & 25 I'm holding off until I'm back home. I've a feeling I'll be very appreciative of the content; i.e. lots of verbal filth and spewing *loads* of joyful release. My day of Thanks was fine. Hope yours was *full*filling, but not too *filling*, lol. Bad pun, I know, I know... ... ... Adios, Buddy! Enjoy the leftovers! 🤰(closest emoji I have too being too full, lol)

11/29/22, 2:20 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Hope that you had a SUPA time during your holiday & a SAFE flight back home!:flight_arrival: I have stock-piled a series of intense "loadbusting" chapters for U to RAGE & catchup on (chs. 24-27!!)...::mailbox: So MANY curveballs :baseball: & twists & turns....Hope U get a chance 2 ENJOY them SOON!:smiling_imp: Have an AWESOME day, my friend!:sunglasses:

Zai
12/1/22, 6:50 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hola! Aloha! Salutations! I just sent you a reply, Dude! 😈 How you doing, fellow superhero converter? 😍 I've got loads of loads, *lol*, ready to fire away and take orbit like a rocket ship. 🚀 Read U Later, Amigo! 👀👓📚

12/1/22, 4:50 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI! AWESOME 2 hear from U...I'm hangin in there...and bangin away @these NEW chapters!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: HAPPY 2 hear U R "locked & loaded":smirk_cat: to take a ride on SUPALEX Coaster....strap yourself in 4 one helluva ride!!:rocket: Savor every bit of the storyline...I know U gots lotsa curveballs & cumshowers 2 catchup on!!:sweat_drops: WELCUM Back, my friend & Have a Productive day!:boom:

Zai
12/2/22, 4:55 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Aloha, Oh GREAT Provider of kinky kink writing! I'm fine still kicking and screaming, Lol! Yes, I'll be soda-jerk'in soon as I can! Question of a serious nature... have you ever gotten this message when attempting to access this site: Site Not Private in red letters... etc, etc, and you can't get through to Gayspiralstories? That kept occurring last night/early morning. Hmmm... 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

12/2/22, 1:55 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Happy TGIF Z-MAN! Glad you'll be gettin a chance to catchup on your kink-reading soon....:smiling_imp: With respect to your serious question....I've NEVER received that message before...perhaps the site was offline or maybe doing maintenance!?!?:thinking: It's the ONLY thing I can think of as to why you woulda received that message....:monocle_face: Sorry U were having that issue, but hopefully, you'll be "gettin easy access" from here on out, so you can properly catchup & of course, relay your thoughts/feedback on the last few chapters of SupaLEX!!! Lookin fwd 2 it! Have a SUPA day, my friend!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
12/2/22, 9:27 AM
No news on your progress? We all hope to hear from Hank soon. We are more than willing to see what coach is doing with him and making him do. I bet he is already wearing a wrestling singlet all the time. It's just a question of time that we see him tied in it under a shower and he is taken photos for a web site.