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12/2/22, 12:37 AM
Hot. Hope you do more.

12/2/22, 3:22 PM
@Jonanator I will! Thanks!
12/1/22, 11:37 PM
It's very difficult to deal with faith/religion and being gay. Having struggled with this myself I like your approach. The slow character development is good. It's not like Isaac is instantly gay. Very true to life!

12/2/22, 2:55 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, this was a serious struggle for me, too, and I wanted to portray some of those major steps that had to happen. Few of the characters in this story are fully as *devout* as I imagine you or I were—there’s a little bit more room for their growth, and I’m following the cues of the movie this is inspired by in giving them a sort of… looser or more flexible stance. At the same time I didn’t want them to seem absolutely flippant. It’s not perfect and a longer story might have done the struggle more justice, but I’m glad there’s still some good stuff here that you found relatable!
Zai
12/1/22, 6:24 AM
*Dude*. *SUPERDUDE*! I got some catching up on your chapters! I've been hella busy and I plan on gett'in to reading all about who's gett'in butt-reamed and dick-sucked, etc, ASAP! So noooooooo, I've not fallen off the 👨‍🚀 of the 🌏... face of the Earth, Lol! Later, Oh Spa Luver! *Cum Facials, anyone*? 😀😁😂🤣🌍🌎🌏

12/1/22, 4:43 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) CIAO ZAI!! SO GR8 2 hear from U!!:sparkler: I have 2 admit not hearing from you this week had me "somewhat concerned" (I missed ya, Dude!), but I know that LIFE sometimes gets in the way which detracts us from our "personal pleasures":smiling_imp: Hope you're ENJOYING catchin-up on the various Chapters....hit me up with your astute comments/feedback...Lookin fwd 2 it!:monocle_face: Have a SUPA Day, my friend!:innocent:

Zai
12/2/22, 5:22 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hujambo, SuperDude! Yup, I'm not locked as of right now, but I'm so damn loaded you'll probably hear my roar of release the 5000+ kilometers from my home to Miami, lol! 👅👅👅 Later, Alligator!

12/2/22, 2:04 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) LMAO!!! C&C ZAI!! Dying of laughter at the thought of being able to "hear your ROAR of release" from your home to mine...:rofl: but, it's also actually kinda HOTTT!!!:smiling_imp: (now, U have me imagining "the shooting part" of the release, too!:sweat_drops: -- you know how I get about cumshowers!:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain:) Happy TGIF, my friend-- Hope your Friday is a Productive one!:innocent:
Zai
11/23/22, 4:07 PM
🤸‍♂️🤸‍♀️🤹‍♂️🤹‍♀️ Yup, the above are the closest I've got for cheerleading. *Lol*! Yup, I'm salivating for BatFag's continued training in the fine art of... The BITCH! 🤤😝😏😋 Bruce Wayne AND Batman were born to become submissive, bottom slut whores who crave huge dicks and the cock snot they spurt! 😈👿 Happy Thanksgiving, SuperDude! 🦃🦃🦃🍗🍗🍗🍞🍞🍞🍍🍍🍍🥕🥕🥕

11/24/22, 4:12 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy Turkey Day 2 U & Yours!:turkey: I'm pretty sure that U will be pleased when U get to read Chapter 24...unfortunately, it's still awaiting approval...I was hoping that I submitted it early enough yesterday so that it would be a "FRESH ARRIVAL" 4 your reading pleasure today (after your pie/dessert!:pie:)...keeping my fingaz crossed that it will be released sometime today!!:innocent: ENJOY the day & BE THANKFUL 4 WHAT U GOT, my friend...I know I am!!:pray:

11/24/22, 4:16 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Hey ZAI! :sparkler:SPECIAL ALERT!!:sparkler:CHAPTER 24 is UP NOW!! It literally just went up as I was typing these replies 2 U....ENJOY it & Happy Gobble Gobble day!:turkey:

Zai
11/25/22, 3:01 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) CHEERS, DUDE! Fresh chapter tonight followed by fresh cream delivery *filthy wink*! That'll be my best dessert, Lol! Have lots of fun and don't eat too much... we don't want you exploding *THAT WAY... wink-wink*, now do we??? Ciao, buddy! 😀😁😂🤣😃😄😅😆😉

11/25/22, 5:11 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI! Hope U find CHAPTER 24 filled with HARD-n-CREAMY surprises!:zany_face: I just completed CHAPTER 25, which has been uploaded & is awaiting approval from the EXCELLENT GSS staff! Hope UR Gobble Gobble day in MAINE was STUFFED with GR8 Food & Good-natured FUN!🦃 ENJOY the weekend!:sunglasses:

Zai
11/26/22, 9:16 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) 24 & 25 I'm holding off until I'm back home. I've a feeling I'll be very appreciative of the content; i.e. lots of verbal filth and spewing *loads* of joyful release. My day of Thanks was fine. Hope yours was *full*filling, but not too *filling*, lol. Bad pun, I know, I know... ... ... Adios, Buddy! Enjoy the leftovers! 🤰(closest emoji I have too being too full, lol)

11/29/22, 2:20 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Hope that you had a SUPA time during your holiday & a SAFE flight back home!:flight_arrival: I have stock-piled a series of intense "loadbusting" chapters for U to RAGE & catchup on (chs. 24-27!!)...::mailbox: So MANY curveballs :baseball: & twists & turns....Hope U get a chance 2 ENJOY them SOON!:smiling_imp: Have an AWESOME day, my friend!:sunglasses:

Zai
12/1/22, 6:50 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hola! Aloha! Salutations! I just sent you a reply, Dude! 😈 How you doing, fellow superhero converter? 😍 I've got loads of loads, *lol*, ready to fire away and take orbit like a rocket ship. 🚀 Read U Later, Amigo! 👀👓📚

12/1/22, 4:50 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI! AWESOME 2 hear from U...I'm hangin in there...and bangin away @these NEW chapters!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: HAPPY 2 hear U R "locked & loaded":smirk_cat: to take a ride on SUPALEX Coaster....strap yourself in 4 one helluva ride!!:rocket: Savor every bit of the storyline...I know U gots lotsa curveballs & cumshowers 2 catchup on!!:sweat_drops: WELCUM Back, my friend & Have a Productive day!:boom:

Zai
12/2/22, 4:55 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Aloha, Oh GREAT Provider of kinky kink writing! I'm fine still kicking and screaming, Lol! Yes, I'll be soda-jerk'in soon as I can! Question of a serious nature... have you ever gotten this message when attempting to access this site: Site Not Private in red letters... etc, etc, and you can't get through to Gayspiralstories? That kept occurring last night/early morning. Hmmm... 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

12/2/22, 1:55 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Happy TGIF Z-MAN! Glad you'll be gettin a chance to catchup on your kink-reading soon....:smiling_imp: With respect to your serious question....I've NEVER received that message before...perhaps the site was offline or maybe doing maintenance!?!?:thinking: It's the ONLY thing I can think of as to why you woulda received that message....:monocle_face: Sorry U were having that issue, but hopefully, you'll be "gettin easy access" from here on out, so you can properly catchup & of course, relay your thoughts/feedback on the last few chapters of SupaLEX!!! Lookin fwd 2 it! Have a SUPA day, my friend!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
12/2/22, 9:27 AM
No news on your progress? We all hope to hear from Hank soon. We are more than willing to see what coach is doing with him and making him do. I bet he is already wearing a wrestling singlet all the time. It's just a question of time that we see him tied in it under a shower and he is taken photos for a web site.
12/2/22, 7:25 AM
After reading this chapter, i regretted having given you all 5 flames for the first chapters, simply because it meant i couldn't give it a higher rating on this chapter. It was off the chart! Wow! All the other categories are pretty much right up there. I left a little room for their romance to bloom further. This has to be as good as the best of the stories i've read on this site. It's definitely one of my very favorites. Thanks so much.

12/2/22, 9:17 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I confess I got a shiver when I read the first part of your comment, but I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thank you so much for your feedback.
12/2/22, 5:53 AM
So wonderfully sweet! The perfect setting for the ending to a wonderful story. I loved following up on this story and seeing their relationship blossom and with baby Caio, all is great in the world! Thank you for sharing this, Twan.

12/2/22, 9:14 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you so much Essex 💖
12/2/22, 8:14 AM
I see Darius becoming Nick's lover in the future & his top.
12/1/22, 4:35 PM
Great story with really good pacing and some clever twists I didn't see coming.

12/1/22, 9:40 PM
Thanks @[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386), I always like when I’m able to surprise you with a twist — you’re so genre savvy it can be difficult!

12/2/22, 4:33 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Here, what took me by surprise was the revelation that the genie has all this time been working with multiple "clients" at once, so the narrator is a pawn in a larger game. And that really is playing with our generic expectations about genie stories, which usually treat the human who finds the genie as somehow special.

12/2/22, 6:27 AM
It was a genuine twist for me too - I didn’t know until I wrote the scene. Originally I thought the genie was preparing DJ to top him, but then things played out differently than I expected. Sometimes I just do what the characters tell me.
Sebastián Apollo
12/2/22, 12:14 AM
Very well done! I always pay special attention to the spiral downward from intellectual to dumb himbo, as it's a favorite of mine to watch the dumbing down and the bulking up - and you performed well in spades! I especially like how you played into the porn star fantasy - I think that's a very common teenage/young adult fantasy, and I was appreciative to see DJ live it out!

12/2/22, 1:41 AM
Thanks @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)! One of the working titles to this was 'slippery slope', because there's a cool compounding effect that happens. The more wishes he makes, the less judgement he shows making the next one. DJ didn't stand a chance.