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12/1/22, 4:52 AM
I loved the drive to the hopeful result! THANK YOU ... what a well written piece. I loved it.

12/1/22, 6:33 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you so much for your kind words, it's so encouraging to get praise and I hope my work continues to entertain & amuse
12/1/22, 5:53 PM
The writing is great and the whole clown thing I can certainly get on board with.
Dec 1, 2022
12/1/22, 5:45 PM
It is absolutely awesome to see you posting again. Love your stories and captions!
screamingmoist
12/1/22, 1:20 PM
I forgot to mention that this was from a request by OrcChieftan over on twitter if you'd like to let them know what you thought.
Anonymous
12/1/22, 8:55 AM
How is the last chapter going? @peachy
12/1/22, 7:31 AM
Yeah, can't wait for waiting for another month! Simply amazing waiting! Heh heh. And I'll hold off with the excessive commenting now too for now, sigh.
Sebastián Apollo
12/1/22, 6:43 AM
So I first began with this chapter, but afterwards went back and read the previous two. Very nice work, I'm actually quite interested in seeing how this turns out. I also concur with time.to.occur, the fact that the book has some sort of sentience really adds another dimension to the story. I can't wait to see where the stakes raise! Keep it up!
Sebastián Apollo
12/1/22, 6:12 AM
Poor Noah, he was so confused why he was losing his best buddy. But hopefully Gabriel can enlighten him and share some of those sexy secrets with him. Brilliant descriptions, slowly explaining the transformation effects and the before/after. Great work!
12/1/22, 6:08 AM
Excellent stuff
12/1/22, 6:06 AM
I see we have a "Ben 10" fan on the site these days! Very clever. However, I do agree that the creepy gothic clown transformations do not do much for me; similarly, the disturbing realism of the psychological state of living in a mindless dictatorship, especially the after-effects of eighteen years of propaganda turning a man against his family, are too unsettling to be sexy. And as ever, the inclusion of female characters (especially being transformed and affected) is almost always a quick "no" from me; in a weird way, it brings realism into a place where I go to explore deep fantasy, and realism is the antithesis of porn. :p All told, I think it's an excellent _(horror)_ story, but I didn't read it as a _(sexy)_ story. But to each their own! You are a great writer!