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12/2/22, 9:27 AM
No news on your progress? We all hope to hear from Hank soon. We are more than willing to see what coach is doing with him and making him do. I bet he is already wearing a wrestling singlet all the time. It's just a question of time that we see him tied in it under a shower and he is taken photos for a web site.
12/2/22, 7:25 AM
After reading this chapter, i regretted having given you all 5 flames for the first chapters, simply because it meant i couldn't give it a higher rating on this chapter. It was off the chart! Wow! All the other categories are pretty much right up there. I left a little room for their romance to bloom further. This has to be as good as the best of the stories i've read on this site. It's definitely one of my very favorites. Thanks so much.

12/2/22, 9:17 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I confess I got a shiver when I read the first part of your comment, but I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thank you so much for your feedback.
12/2/22, 5:53 AM
So wonderfully sweet! The perfect setting for the ending to a wonderful story. I loved following up on this story and seeing their relationship blossom and with baby Caio, all is great in the world! Thank you for sharing this, Twan.

12/2/22, 9:14 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you so much Essex 💖
12/2/22, 8:14 AM
I see Darius becoming Nick's lover in the future & his top.
12/1/22, 4:35 PM
Great story with really good pacing and some clever twists I didn't see coming.

12/1/22, 9:40 PM
Thanks @[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386), I always like when I’m able to surprise you with a twist — you’re so genre savvy it can be difficult!

12/2/22, 4:33 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Here, what took me by surprise was the revelation that the genie has all this time been working with multiple "clients" at once, so the narrator is a pawn in a larger game. And that really is playing with our generic expectations about genie stories, which usually treat the human who finds the genie as somehow special.

12/2/22, 6:27 AM
It was a genuine twist for me too - I didn’t know until I wrote the scene. Originally I thought the genie was preparing DJ to top him, but then things played out differently than I expected. Sometimes I just do what the characters tell me.
Sebastián Apollo
12/2/22, 12:14 AM
Very well done! I always pay special attention to the spiral downward from intellectual to dumb himbo, as it's a favorite of mine to watch the dumbing down and the bulking up - and you performed well in spades! I especially like how you played into the porn star fantasy - I think that's a very common teenage/young adult fantasy, and I was appreciative to see DJ live it out!

12/2/22, 1:41 AM
Thanks @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)! One of the working titles to this was 'slippery slope', because there's a cool compounding effect that happens. The more wishes he makes, the less judgement he shows making the next one. DJ didn't stand a chance.
12/1/22, 5:12 PM
Thank you for the story, but, I need to ask: will you upload/update the catch of the day here?

12/1/22, 9:42 PM
You’re welcome @[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317). I think the last few chapters of CotD are going to stay on my Patreon in the near future, but I’ll be sure to keep posting free stories here every so often.

12/1/22, 9:47 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) I can wait for them to become public, unfortunately your patreon is to expansive ofr my income, as even tough the dolar has gone down, Patreon haven't re balanced it's prices yet

12/1/22, 9:47 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) my first reply sounded to selfish, so I deleted and rewrote it to what I truly meant

12/1/22, 11:36 PM
Hey @[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) – no worries, I get that it's not affordable for everyone. The problem with doing a Patreon for a niche community is that either the prices have to be too high for some folks, or I don't make enough to make it worth doing on the regular. Hopefully Patreon rebalances their currency prices soon so it makes more sense.

12/1/22, 11:39 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) okay, I will wait to see what happens first, the price re balances or the stories go public, which ever happens first
12/1/22, 11:11 PM
One of my favourite stories here, and this chapter doesn’t disappoint! Keep up the amazing work.
Anonymous
11/13/22, 4:28 PM
Is there going to be a new chapter soon?

12/1/22, 10:32 PM
@Anonymous Yes.
Martin
12/1/22, 9:54 PM
I'd love to have get a glimpse into the actual drone conversion. It's what's making these stories hot for me. As it is, it's basically a story about controlling rubber men, which in itself doesn't appeal to me too much, I'm afraid