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Sebastián Apollo
12/1/22, 6:43 AM
So I first began with this chapter, but afterwards went back and read the previous two. Very nice work, I'm actually quite interested in seeing how this turns out. I also concur with time.to.occur, the fact that the book has some sort of sentience really adds another dimension to the story. I can't wait to see where the stakes raise! Keep it up!
Sebastián Apollo
12/1/22, 6:12 AM
Poor Noah, he was so confused why he was losing his best buddy. But hopefully Gabriel can enlighten him and share some of those sexy secrets with him. Brilliant descriptions, slowly explaining the transformation effects and the before/after. Great work!
12/1/22, 6:08 AM
Excellent stuff
12/1/22, 6:06 AM
I see we have a "Ben 10" fan on the site these days! Very clever. However, I do agree that the creepy gothic clown transformations do not do much for me; similarly, the disturbing realism of the psychological state of living in a mindless dictatorship, especially the after-effects of eighteen years of propaganda turning a man against his family, are too unsettling to be sexy. And as ever, the inclusion of female characters (especially being transformed and affected) is almost always a quick "no" from me; in a weird way, it brings realism into a place where I go to explore deep fantasy, and realism is the antithesis of porn. :p All told, I think it's an excellent _(horror)_ story, but I didn't read it as a _(sexy)_ story. But to each their own! You are a great writer!
Dec 1, 2022
12/1/22, 6:05 AM
Would love a continuation of this!
12/1/22, 6:03 AM
This series just keep getting better and better! I'm really enjoying it. The book's limited agency and sense of justice is especially interesting to me.
12/1/22, 12:52 AM
Great story. Was there something in the water that caused the changes?

12/1/22, 6:00 AM
@[tanners92](/user/show/963694) I haven't decided on a mechanism that caused the transformation just yet, sometimes I like it when it's sort of ethereal and unclear what exactly is causing it. If anything, I've been leaning towards Chris having some sort of power within himself to effect these changes. Other notes I've received have said that the tf aspect felt a bit rushed, perhaps a solution going forward would be to follow Chris around (and maybe Greg too) as he does this with many men, so I can spend more time on the tf without feeling like it's breaking up the flow of a self-contained story.
12/1/22, 5:51 AM
Such a hot series.
Somnus
12/1/22, 5:06 AM
I have to agree with Hypnothrill. I read the title and was excited for colorful scenes of mass conversion with guys sprouting big candy cane cocks, getting infected by squirting flowers and giggling hysterically as they're overcome by the mind breaking pleasure of clownification. Instead this was just a little too joylessly dystopian for me, even down to the clowns being black and white.
12/1/22, 12:51 AM
Finally fully caught up on this after not reading the last few chapters for no real reason other than being distracted by other stories. But damn. This story is not only hot, but I legitimately care about these characters. Archie is such a well fleshed out and lovely person that I root for. Carson, for some reason, just turns me on no matter what scene he’s in. And I honestly love Van. He’s interesting, smart, caring, and attempts to be a good person with these insane powers. I’m so fucking impressed.