Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/18/25, 4:17 AM
I want to enjoy this more and I’m all for stories slowly teasing things along, but there’s so much repetition and so many turns of phrase coming back over and over again. Presumably that’s an AI thing, rather than unimaginative writing? Snaps me right out of it anyway. Fucking hate AI.

4/18/25, 12:09 PM
@Anonymous Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I did use AI to help with the wording, and I appreciate the feedback. I’ll keep it in mind as I continue working on the story.
4/18/25, 1:08 AM
Hot. Can't wait for more.

4/18/25, 12:07 PM
@Jonanator Thanks!
4/18/25, 12:00 PM
Jack, you have done it again. I know it will be a good day when I find one of your new episodes or stories
Anonymous
4/18/25, 11:54 AM
I LOVE where this is going. You write with all the emotions and thoughts perfectly intertwined with the lusts of your characters that I can't help but be suck up in their world! Hate off!
4/18/25, 10:20 AM
I look forward to reading more of Butler Peter's adventures! Really excellent introduction to his kinky world 😋
4/18/25, 6:58 AM
i loved the way Sam took the news of Alex's transformation and sluttish behavior. It sounds like Sam has some exploring to do as well.
4/18/25, 6:44 AM
i suppose i'm just an _ethical_ submissive wannabe slut, a slave to one Master. If that Master wanted to do more with my submission, obedience and craving to please dominant men, that would be up to him. That said i am both disappointed and enthralled with how this story is developing. I am rather disappointed that Alex committed to becoming a serious slut - a whore without pay, without talking with Sam. I am simultaneously enthralled at the thought that with just a few sessions Alex could be changed so significantly. Pleasing superior men is certainly a submissive bottom boy's primary motivation, but the sense that one gets by giving up all control to a dominant man is also an enthralling experience.
4/18/25, 6:23 AM
Glad to see another chapter. Great work!
4/17/25, 7:16 PM
This is so good! It made me want to write again. I love literally everything about this.

4/18/25, 6:14 AM
@[Calvin](/user/show/2552525) Thank you! I'm glad it did as it was Henry's World Processor that inspired me to start this one :grin:
4/18/25, 6:08 AM
In my limited experience hypnosis seems to take effect much more slowly and with a lot more repetition, so much so that in the end it seems difficult for the subject to have more than a muddled understanding of the changes that may have been wrought. Still for me the idea of a Dominant using it as a tool to induce substantial changes in his boy/boyfriend is so so hot. LockedPig seems to have a good firsthand understanding and experience with inductions, setting triggers and making changes to his subjects' subconscious minds. This authenticity makes the story so much more real and arousing. Alex's lack of awareness that these training files are having as much effect on his submissiveness as they are on his ability to bottom is exciting. He first learns to bottom comfortably, then to take pleasure in bottoming, craving bottoming, and later in submitting and serving men who make him feel like the bottom slut he now believes he is. @LockedPig For your imagination, story-telling, and sharing you have my thanks, appreciation, and admiration.