Recent Comments

11/28/22, 2:41 PM
are you kidding with the round 2... the slow re-emergence of his giant ... inside?!!!. i was just WIDE EYED! Also, I just love Matt's pecs and his passion for the experience. This was a GREAT chapter. Thank YOU! I would have loved to be invited to learn about the smells of this particular experience with Matt and the gymrat. Don't forget me that I love all the smells of the experience. YOU are a great writer and this is pure fun!
11/28/22, 2:23 PM
i imagined my own workout friends while enjoying the chapter. Bill, the whole scene was just visually perfect. WELL DONE! Also, I think i know which Belami boys.... i still cannot stop thinking of them servicing him.
Jul 30, 2011
11/28/22, 2:10 PM
Love tjis!
11/27/22, 4:55 PM
I would love to see Brody become the slave of Kevin. Also a slave should have all his body hair permanently removed ( by laser). How humiliating would that be. Will we get to see Jeffrey & the rest of the wrestling team fuck Brody.

11/28/22, 1:26 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) I commend you on the quality of your writing & what you have done to the original story, In addition it is remarkable you find the time on top of your work & studies. I am a great fan. We may have our desires for where the story goes but it is yours alone that count. I am up to Chap 12and should catch within the next day or two, then reread again as a second reading of a great story reveals much more than the first.
6/12/22, 3:24 PM
I wonder if he will keep going or not. I would love to see Jimmy fucking Brody, but also see Brody getting revenge from Coach and the reverend.

11/28/22, 1:04 PM
@[Caio_Lucas](/user/show/10022457) Jimmy & the other wrestlers fucking Brody
Boomer
11/28/22, 11:21 AM
Always loving see this scene play out the right way
Jack
11/28/22, 3:58 AM
I don't come over to the pure romance side too often because there aren't a lot of stories written here, but damn. Hot, holy fucking damn. You've got a way with words, Author.

11/28/22, 9:59 AM
@[Jack](/user/show/915335) Hey there. So happy to hear you enjoyed it! Hoping you enjoy the rest of the chapters too!
11/28/22, 6:03 AM
One of the best Kaa-vore stories I’ve read.
11/28/22, 5:40 AM
Nice job! Definitely got a wank outta me for this one. I don't usually go for 2nd person stories, but you sold me on it. I also appreciate how the transformed person was into it, and the way the transformer kept teasing him. Something about the transfomer constantly reminding the twink he was going to be super basic really did for me, which was nice surprise. Thanks for writing!
11/28/22, 5:20 AM
Always a hot read when a "Total Top" is toppled. Glad to see you writing again after so long!