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Jul 30, 2011
11/28/22, 2:10 PM
Love tjis!
11/27/22, 4:55 PM
I would love to see Brody become the slave of Kevin. Also a slave should have all his body hair permanently removed ( by laser). How humiliating would that be. Will we get to see Jeffrey & the rest of the wrestling team fuck Brody.

11/28/22, 1:26 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) I commend you on the quality of your writing & what you have done to the original story, In addition it is remarkable you find the time on top of your work & studies. I am a great fan. We may have our desires for where the story goes but it is yours alone that count. I am up to Chap 12and should catch within the next day or two, then reread again as a second reading of a great story reveals much more than the first.
6/12/22, 3:24 PM
I wonder if he will keep going or not. I would love to see Jimmy fucking Brody, but also see Brody getting revenge from Coach and the reverend.

11/28/22, 1:04 PM
@[Caio_Lucas](/user/show/10022457) Jimmy & the other wrestlers fucking Brody
Boomer
11/28/22, 11:21 AM
Always loving see this scene play out the right way
Jack
11/28/22, 3:58 AM
I don't come over to the pure romance side too often because there aren't a lot of stories written here, but damn. Hot, holy fucking damn. You've got a way with words, Author.

11/28/22, 9:59 AM
@[Jack](/user/show/915335) Hey there. So happy to hear you enjoyed it! Hoping you enjoy the rest of the chapters too!
11/28/22, 6:03 AM
One of the best Kaa-vore stories I’ve read.
11/28/22, 5:40 AM
Nice job! Definitely got a wank outta me for this one. I don't usually go for 2nd person stories, but you sold me on it. I also appreciate how the transformed person was into it, and the way the transformer kept teasing him. Something about the transfomer constantly reminding the twink he was going to be super basic really did for me, which was nice surprise. Thanks for writing!
11/28/22, 5:20 AM
Always a hot read when a "Total Top" is toppled. Glad to see you writing again after so long!
11/27/22, 6:03 PM
why cant Luthor just enjoy his reward for his domination without all this meddling!!!!

11/27/22, 7:27 PM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) Hi CuriousJ! He is getting to ENJOY his reward.....he just got thrown a "curveball"...that's ALL!!:baseball: He's devious & diabolical enough to overcome "a momentary obstacle", don't you think?!?!:warning: The "meddling" (as you refer to it), keeps the story moving forward... Don't get discouraged....more "twists & turns" will come in the NEXT chapter (believe me)!!:smiling_imp: THANKS 4 the continued interest & positive feedback/comments!!:innocent:

11/27/22, 7:54 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) i understand...i just love seeing Superman fall so much to Lex Luthor that i get frustrated when their is an obstacle....Lex Luthor is so hot to me...and now to Superman

11/28/22, 3:15 AM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) Hey CuriousJ! THANKS 4 understanding....I assure you that you will ENJOY the NEXT Chapter (#27)!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Believe me, I LOVE the Lex Luthor character as well (which is why is the main character of this story!)!! :smiling_imp: The fact that he is SO determined to get Superman to succumb to his masculine wiles, I find to be EXTREMELY HOT!:fire: ENJOY your evening!:sparkler: