Recent Comments

11/26/22, 2:50 AM
Really loved this. Fingers crossed that we will get a chapter 2.
11/26/22, 12:27 AM
Woow, so much fun Thanks for an amazing chapter, I am w8ing for more😊
11/25/22, 2:32 PM
I loved the process of hypno-capturing the boy. Luke...so very unexpected. I loved this story. Please write more. I love the description of the workout pants and his body.

11/26/22, 12:22 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you, I wanted this to be light and fun, focused on a quick single workout, and Can I ask what was unexpected about Luke? And do plan on writing more stories, maybe not these two but more.
11/25/22, 11:38 PM
Amazing chapter. I loved this! So so hot. Love their oblivious, dumb jock behaviour and Theo trying to hard to drop hints that aren't picked up. Can't wait for more!
11/25/22, 10:55 PM
I love how you expanded the lore from the first story here! Great stuff!
Nov 25, 2022
11/25/22, 10:52 PM
The two hypnotists worked so well together and their approach was so good. Well done with the more classic hypnotic methods and Elijah's obliviousness and submission to them. Great story.
Anonymous
11/25/22, 10:45 PM
I love this series already! So hot how it gets more and more depraved!
11/25/22, 9:16 PM
This made my cock hard as fuck. I nutted good too. Can't wait to read the next part.
11/25/22, 7:50 PM
Hot. Hope more comes.