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11/25/22, 10:55 PM
I love how you expanded the lore from the first story here! Great stuff!
Nov 25, 2022
11/25/22, 10:52 PM
The two hypnotists worked so well together and their approach was so good. Well done with the more classic hypnotic methods and Elijah's obliviousness and submission to them. Great story.
Anonymous
11/25/22, 10:45 PM
I love this series already! So hot how it gets more and more depraved!
11/25/22, 9:16 PM
This made my cock hard as fuck. I nutted good too. Can't wait to read the next part.
11/25/22, 7:50 PM
Hot. Hope more comes.
Flyboi67
11/25/22, 7:14 PM
Super HOT!! Great JO material. I absolutely love it. PLEASE add a part 2 or even 3!
Nov 25, 2022
11/25/22, 6:47 PM
very fun concept and I really enjoyed the imagery, thank you! and I look forward to seeing how this develops! Or what other fun Elijah gets up to!
Nov 25, 2022
11/25/22, 5:23 PM
I love the pair of them seducing this man. So incredibly slick.
Zai
11/25/22, 2:50 AM
Hello, my friend! Just got in from sledding. I'm at my family's home in Maine for the next few days. Took the red, red-eye and slept until 9am this morning. That's late for me, lol, as I'm up usually by 4:30 am to go running. I ate sparingly yet I'm still filled-up, thus the sledding. It was loads of fun, and I do so love the chilly willy weather. I'm sad on your behalf πŸ˜”! Life can suck so horribly! I've wished for so long we lived where worldwide all sexual orientions were accepted as part of the norm (exceptions Pedophilia, Beastiality, etc.). It'd be so nice to go about life dating, holding holds, kissing, etc in public like the so called normal straights do... ... ... *sour expression*! ☹ Maybe eventually, your true first love will reevaluate his feelings and give your love story the renewal it deserves? Hope doth spring eternal! πŸ˜‡ I found out from this sites admin (great guy, Martin) that my story was never received for validation. So I'm gonna start from scratch... again... *lighthearted frustrated grumpy lol* πŸ˜–. I hope your Turkey Day was fun-filled, food-filled, and drama-free!!! πŸ—πŸžπŸ„πŸ₯•πŸŒ½πŸ₯” Yay! Yay! Yay! 24... here I cummmmm... late, late tonight, in my room. Like in my youth with the stereotypical young lad utilizing the torch under his bed clothes, perusing dirty mags or comic books, etc. I was always the latter, Lol! Have a sweet night, SuperDude! πŸ˜„.

11/25/22, 2:56 AM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) where in maine....thats where i am

Zai
11/25/22, 10:25 AM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) 0gunquit! Where are you? Driving up to Freeport (Down East) to hit the L.L. Bean store. I always enjoy going there. Later!

11/25/22, 4:43 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) portland

11/25/22, 5:19 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI! I see U & CuriousJ are BOTH enjoying the CRISP splendor of MAINE!!:snowflake: SO GLAD U were able to sort out the logistics of your story with the GSS Staff...they are AWESOME, aren't they!??! Thanks 4 your kind/comforting words about my "first love experience"....:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: LIFE is LIFE...you take the pain from one experience & you hopefully grow from that a STRONGER human being....:muscle: and it did help me, emancipate myself from my parents control/hold over me & I was able to achieve/succeed in my career (& I did find love again, twice), but now, I may be alone, but I'm secure/confident in LOVING MYSELF!:heartpulse: Hope U ENJOY Chs. 24 (& 25, which I just submiited moments ago!).... Have an AWESOME weekend in MAINE!:snowboarder:
billi
11/7/22, 3:32 PM
sad :( any chance for a happy ending in a part 2? :pleading_face:

11/8/22, 6:03 PM
@[billi](/user/show/1479350) The author did mention that this is a one-shot, so I think it's most likely won't happen. However, while the story is rightly belong to the author, what he hasn't written and left open is fair game for your imagination. And in this case, the future has plenty of posibilities. For example: some money for hiring detective, some stalking (from the shadow!), some notes of daily routine, a rag soaked in chloroform for a certain unsuspected Mr. D, some ropes and duct tapes, some feeding tubes, a sound proofed room, and voila! An in-house living dildo accessible 24/7 for Andy, less need for visitors and Rob would have an easier time watching the show (they are all friends, no stranger here!). Just remember to keep the mouth shut, dildo has no need for talking. Throwing in a fullbody rubber suit with hood and blindfold and Mr. D would be set for a merry life 😈 What? The dildo couldn't put up? Some extra things in the food force feeded through the tube and a few vibrators may help the problem 😎 Nipple suction cups too. That's one of the posibilities. You can make yours.

11/25/22, 4:31 PM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) Whoa! Now THAT would be an awesome sequel.