Recent Comments

Zander
4/18/25, 9:16 AM
Hot story, I like the pace of development and slow burn. I hope they reveal more about Logan as a character and Joe. I would like to know about their families and their lives before college and it would also be nice to see pictures of the characters in the next chapter to understand how the author of the story presents them).

4/18/25, 12:18 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Glad you’re enjoying the story. I’ll be revealing more about their backgrounds in later chapters. As for pictures, I prefer to leave that to the reader’s imagination 😉
4/18/25, 7:29 AM
Goodness gracious! Great stuff.

4/18/25, 12:09 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Much appreciated.
Anonymous
4/18/25, 4:17 AM
I want to enjoy this more and I’m all for stories slowly teasing things along, but there’s so much repetition and so many turns of phrase coming back over and over again. Presumably that’s an AI thing, rather than unimaginative writing? Snaps me right out of it anyway. Fucking hate AI.

4/18/25, 12:09 PM
@Anonymous Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I did use AI to help with the wording, and I appreciate the feedback. I’ll keep it in mind as I continue working on the story.
4/18/25, 1:08 AM
Hot. Can't wait for more.

4/18/25, 12:07 PM
@Jonanator Thanks!
4/18/25, 12:00 PM
Jack, you have done it again. I know it will be a good day when I find one of your new episodes or stories
Anonymous
4/18/25, 11:54 AM
I LOVE where this is going. You write with all the emotions and thoughts perfectly intertwined with the lusts of your characters that I can't help but be suck up in their world! Hate off!
4/18/25, 10:20 AM
I look forward to reading more of Butler Peter's adventures! Really excellent introduction to his kinky world 😋
4/18/25, 6:58 AM
i loved the way Sam took the news of Alex's transformation and sluttish behavior. It sounds like Sam has some exploring to do as well.
4/18/25, 6:44 AM
i suppose i'm just an _ethical_ submissive wannabe slut, a slave to one Master. If that Master wanted to do more with my submission, obedience and craving to please dominant men, that would be up to him. That said i am both disappointed and enthralled with how this story is developing. I am rather disappointed that Alex committed to becoming a serious slut - a whore without pay, without talking with Sam. I am simultaneously enthralled at the thought that with just a few sessions Alex could be changed so significantly. Pleasing superior men is certainly a submissive bottom boy's primary motivation, but the sense that one gets by giving up all control to a dominant man is also an enthralling experience.
4/18/25, 6:23 AM
Glad to see another chapter. Great work!