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11/23/22, 1:54 PM
Loved the idea of a marine rubber drone (green cammo rubber), I would like to read more
11/23/22, 12:21 PM
What a great world you’ve built the reactions and people seem realistic (considering the premise of course) and not lacking in hot sex either.
Anonymous
11/23/22, 9:35 AM
Very hot! Would be great to see him virtually transcend into godhood
Nov 15, 2022
Anonymous
11/16/22, 3:29 AM
Damn… these series has just been so good so far, I’m loving everything about it, I’m all in for the hypno-slave troop tbh and also the situation with Josh, I like that we get to see both of these situations coexisting in the same story, I really REALLY can’t wait to see how this continues!

11/16/22, 9:23 PM
I think reading about hypnosis, meditation, altered states of consciousness, and cognitive science have made the hypno-slave into a bad taste for me, but I think your assessment shows a positive light on this part of the story. So then I agree with you I'm looking forward to the next part of the story.

11/23/22, 8:07 AM
Thanks! There will be more, and it will be going in different directions :)

11/23/22, 8:12 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) I get that. I'll admit that I can definitely enjoy a hot evil brainwashing enslavement story, but I usually enjoy it more when there's some tension, and when actions have some kind of consequences. Hypnotizing one of your friends into having sex with you sounds hot - but what do you do after? (Beyond the obvious, of course.) So at least in these Ethan stories, that will continue to be an underlying theme.
Nov 15, 2022
11/16/22, 3:07 AM
I liked the story overall; I enjoyed the conflict within Mark's character: that he wants to be hypnotized but is afraid of losing his free will and identity. I enjoyed most of the story, but Mark being just a hypno-slave at the end seems sad to me. If there was some way Mark could be a servant and yet have some sense of identity like Josh, I'd be happier with the ending.

11/23/22, 8:05 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for the comment on Mark and his inner conflict. As for his future - stay tuned. Ethan's told me he doesn't want mindless slaves, so Mark probably has a more interesting future ahead of him :wink:
Nov 15, 2022
Anonymous
11/15/22, 11:47 PM
This was so incredibly hot

11/23/22, 8:03 AM
Thanks!
Nov 15, 2022
11/15/22, 9:38 PM
Hope more will come.

11/23/22, 8:02 AM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Stay tuned :)
Nov 15, 2022
11/15/22, 3:24 PM
Hot! Very sexy. Also I like how he still has fun with his best friend while now also having a 'slave' to play with too. Great story. Hot stuff. I liked the choice 'you can pick freedom or you can pick being being good boy', and the choice he made. So hot. I do wish he had dome some rimming, I mean the moment he was staring at the asshole right before fucking it was a beautiful potential moment for rimming. I look forward to more, such a sexy saga. Ooh can he hypnotize two straight bullies into being his good subby boys/pups. They are so used to obeying 'coach' or their leader that submitting to him came naturally. Great story! Super fun and sexy.

11/23/22, 8:02 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks! For the encouragement, and for the ideas! Ethan has a long list of ideas to try out, there will be more coming :smiley:
Anonymous
11/23/22, 6:34 AM
Excellent foundation to what’s hopefully to be multiple installments
11/22/22, 2:25 PM
Hot. You should do more

11/23/22, 6:30 AM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) I do plan on writing more stories yes