Recent Comments

Nov 15, 2022
11/16/22, 3:07 AM
I liked the story overall; I enjoyed the conflict within Mark's character: that he wants to be hypnotized but is afraid of losing his free will and identity. I enjoyed most of the story, but Mark being just a hypno-slave at the end seems sad to me. If there was some way Mark could be a servant and yet have some sense of identity like Josh, I'd be happier with the ending.

11/23/22, 8:05 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for the comment on Mark and his inner conflict. As for his future - stay tuned. Ethan's told me he doesn't want mindless slaves, so Mark probably has a more interesting future ahead of him :wink:
Nov 15, 2022
Anonymous
11/15/22, 11:47 PM
This was so incredibly hot

11/23/22, 8:03 AM
Thanks!
Nov 15, 2022
11/15/22, 9:38 PM
Hope more will come.

11/23/22, 8:02 AM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Stay tuned :)
Nov 15, 2022
11/15/22, 3:24 PM
Hot! Very sexy. Also I like how he still has fun with his best friend while now also having a 'slave' to play with too. Great story. Hot stuff. I liked the choice 'you can pick freedom or you can pick being being good boy', and the choice he made. So hot. I do wish he had dome some rimming, I mean the moment he was staring at the asshole right before fucking it was a beautiful potential moment for rimming. I look forward to more, such a sexy saga. Ooh can he hypnotize two straight bullies into being his good subby boys/pups. They are so used to obeying 'coach' or their leader that submitting to him came naturally. Great story! Super fun and sexy.

11/23/22, 8:02 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks! For the encouragement, and for the ideas! Ethan has a long list of ideas to try out, there will be more coming :smiley:
Anonymous
11/23/22, 6:34 AM
Excellent foundation to what’s hopefully to be multiple installments
11/22/22, 2:25 PM
Hot. You should do more

11/23/22, 6:30 AM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) I do plan on writing more stories yes
11/23/22, 6:26 AM
Hot story. Hope we see more slaves. Like maybe Bill gets his hands on Peter's son as well?
11/23/22, 4:26 AM
A great second part. [Spoilers I'm glad there are actual relationships rather than just impregnating guys and leaving them.
11/23/22, 3:15 AM
The story being the first slave in the neighborhood. Does that mean there are going to be more slaves in the neighborhood?
11/23/22, 2:56 AM
Many thanks! It's nice to know there are other people out there who like this stuff. Wish there were more people writing about it!