More Curveballs? Really... ... ... ??? *yaaawwwwwnnnnn...* 😴 Just Kidding, *hahahahaha*!!! 😃 Gotta rev up Monday, somehow. Right? 😉 Curveballs are fun, and you've a way in creating clever-curveballs right outta left-field. Ohhh, these baseball references are heating me up. I do so love sexy baseball players in form fitting uniform pants. Yum! I hope your Monday went well and the rest of your week flows smooth as silk, Dude! Adios, StudMuffin! 😄😄😄😆😆😆😉😉😉

*YELLING EMPHATICALLY WITH WILD ARM GESTURES AS I WIPE THE DROOL AWAY...* 💪😋 OH! NO! YOU! DIDN'T! AGAIN! *YELLING GETS LOUDER* 😰 ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER?! WITH RICO ABOUT READY TO MUNCH AWAY ON *THE* BATCUNT!? THAN FUCK THAT TIGHT HOLE... AGAIN?!?!?! 👅 *Calming down...* Dude! You ARE SUCH a big COCKTEASE! Are you certain you're not Lex Luther? Because you Are as Diabolical... no... More Diabolical than that villainous stud bastard! 👿 *Fucking damn curveballs... ... pouting...* 😡 *Whew, release and back TO ZEN* 😚 SuperLEX! Seriously though, you cannot leave readers like this. Sprung but no CumShower? 🌦 Seriously, I need chapter 24 right now. My stiffie ain't going no where... 24, 24, 24 *chanted like that famous film line, "Attica, Attica, Attica!" ASAP, please! 😉 As for SupaSuckSlave getting his CumShower BEFORE me? I'll forgive you... Lol! Just know this, my throat is aching like my tonsils need removing. 🤣 And Lex is far from done with his SupaSexSlave, who's gonna be getting split open on his Master's DickOfDeath! Yes! 😘 This chapter deserves an A+! I love you dressing Batmsn in his skintight costume with the cherry on top being his ultra tight BatBriefs... or as Rico should refer to them - *bragas de murciélago*! PANTIES OF THE BAT! 🤤 Now I'm heating up. I just love Batman in his classic costume, especially those sizzling, Speedo-like briefs. Can you imagine Batman getting bitched AS Batman, with Rico calling his briefs panties, aka *bragas de murciélago*? 😍😛😝 I'm hoping you have Lex pound Superman in his skintight costume asnd briefs, too! Getting the idea after watching Rico (on digital recording) plowing the BatPussy! I need to know? Is Lex ever going to bitch Bruce|BatBitchMan? I need to state... lil' of Jinx the Minx' spell ain't working quite up to snuff, eh??? ❓❓❓ Thanks! I'm still frustrated, SuperLEX! 😠

Hottt.

Sexy story! Nice part two!

I really love this slow transformation/controlling of Ben. Cant wait for the next one.

I am loving this story. Aching every time and wanting for more.

You have done it again, Jack!

I'm not going to lie. I had avoided this series because humiliation is really not my thing. I usually have too much empathy for the characters being embarrassed, so I do not generally enjoy those stories. But, I saw the most recent chapter posted and had nothing better to jerk off to, so I read that chapter. Which led me to starting the series from the beginning. And, while humiliation may not be my thing, I am hugely turned on by characters who are compelled to do things, who are transformed (straight to gay, top to bottom, normal self-willed individual into desperate cockslut whore) against their will, who are physically altered (loss of gag reflex, muscular development) against their will, or who have new thoughts forced into their minds (including in their dreams). So, on those notes: very, very hot story. But, what I want to call attention to is how well written the story is. There are a limited number of main characters, so there are not too many characters for the reader to keep track of--and whenever a character has been absent for a while and is reintroduced to the storyline, you kindly provide a reminder of who that character is and why we care about him/her. The plotline is logical. The descriptions are clear. The dialogue is genuine. The spelling, syntax, and usage are all correct, making it easy to read. And, this last point is huge. I cannot tell you how many times I have just stopped reading what might have been a really hot story because the writing was so disjointed that reading the story took up so much effort that I was losing my erection. Let's be honest: most of us are here reading these stories for masturbation material. Making sure that the writing itself does not interfere with the reception of the story is one of the primary responsibilities of the writer. And, it's one that you have executed admirably in this series. I haven't decided whether I will read the story that takes place before this one. My time is limited and I am much heavier into anal sex than oral sex--and it looks like that story has no anal at all in it. My personal hope for this story now is that, during a gay orgy at their upcoming strip show, Brandon and Dylan get turned into submissive gay sluts with an addiction for getting their holes filled. Then, out of a desire to serve cock and submit to men, they contact Master and submit to him as his permanent slaves. But, I look forward to seeing how your story unfolds. I still have several chapters to go on what you have already published...

Very nice !! I wish to know what will happen to Zack and what Henry will do with/to him, but I also wish to be kept informed of the new D/s relationship between Jack and Riley

Funny and sexy. Maybe an unpopular opinion but I’m mostly interested in him becoming a stupid fuck toy for Lewis.