Recent Comments

11/21/22, 12:58 PM
I really love where this story is going. I'd love to see some enhancement in Reece perhaps because he's eating Nathan's lube. Thanks for the story
Anonymous
11/21/22, 12:11 PM
100/100 Great work
Hazard0707
11/21/22, 11:34 AM
Read from 1 to 12 living every second then I saw meth. Fucking terrible. Even in a story is just. Nah
11/21/22, 11:15 AM
Wow - so hot! Would love to see chapter 2 with Tanner getting cucked too
11/21/22, 11:09 AM
still a highlight
11/21/22, 6:25 AM
Love seeing an update from this series!
10/14/20, 2:15 AM
First off, welcome to writing a story on the site. I can say I enjoyed the first half of the story but the second half was a bit weak to me. The reason why is the story [*Ordinary Joe*](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/1010) treats the same subject matter but fleshes it out in a much deeper way. So you build a nice story but it's just a setup for the sex in the end; perhaps you could delve into the bond between the narrator and Todd not just as sex slaves. But keep up the writing; you've got good talent and style.

11/20/22, 8:44 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thank you I am working on a part two using the amazing advice you gave me hope to be done soon hoping you would protest it for me

11/21/22, 5:48 AM
@[mikeysub](/user/show/847926) Thank you for the update. If you want to shoot to me for a read-through or edit session feel free to contact me on the Forum.
Martin
11/20/22, 9:37 PM
Fuck fuck fuck... This was soooo hot. This is going to be me all time favorite drone series of all, maybe my favorite series of all!

felix
11/21/22, 3:46 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) That's a huge compliment coming from you Martin! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much!
Anonymous
11/21/22, 3:02 AM
Definitely can't wait for the next chapter and to see more of Isaac's side. This is a lot of fun to read.
nycboot
11/21/22, 12:13 AM
I like brainy academic types, so I'm with Duane all the way. Thanks for a fun little story!