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11/20/22, 8:24 PM
I am finding myself cheering more and more for Lex Luthor....what a god he has become

11/20/22, 9:31 PM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) Hi CuriousJ!! THANKS 4 your positive comments & for your continued interest (& cheering on of Lex) in the ongoing storyline!!:star_struck: There's MORE 2 CUM...as I just uploaded Chapter 23 (which is awaiting approval)...so please keep reading & ENJOY your Sunday!!:innocent:
Martin
11/20/22, 9:20 PM
Fuck what a crazy hot chapter! Read it for the second time, and it's even hotter this round! I want to order Gabriel for myself right away... with everything he's going to do to me.
11/17/22, 8:04 PM
I'm still waiting.

Kods
11/20/22, 8:58 PM
@[Alsace-Lorraine](/user/show/908363) wait no more
11/20/22, 8:05 PM
Loved this! Can’t wait to see what happens next
11/20/22, 8:01 PM
you have made Superman into a Superwhore...and i have never wanted to be Superman more
11/20/22, 7:56 PM
i love this funhouse idea...and once i read sling i knew your readers were in for some fun...i love your mind and your writing
Anonymous
11/20/22, 5:04 PM
Ty for the update! It is glorious.
11/20/22, 4:23 PM
I am so so so SO SOOOOOO happy you've added another chapter to this tale!! This is one of my favorite short stories here, and I sure do hope you'll continue this hotness! His gradual descent into submission, and *especially* the way he responds to his new master now that they've met and he's let him cum... Will he be relocked? Will he push back against the recent submissive and bottomy tendencies? What happens when they wake up in the morning? And so much more! 😃🤩
11/20/22, 3:03 PM
Just came back to this. Loved it as I love all your stories.
Nov 19, 2022
11/20/22, 12:13 PM
Posting the first story is always an experience. I’m really glad you did and I enjoyed the story quite a lot. I’d like to know what happens next as well, especially to this new rubber clad drone. The story did jump a little bit and could’ve used a few more details or more paragraph breaks during the dialogue to separate more clearly, who was talking. The lenses being hypnotic wasn’t explained until later, and it felt abrupt. But that’s a minor point and I noticed that because hypnotic goggles/lenses are a major turn on for me. Only real point that felt off was going to the hospital, surgery, failing to get the rubber off, and then he was released. It seems strange that he would be released from the hospital after such an interesting case, came to the doctors. My gut feeling is that they would’ve held onto him for as long as possible while they figured out what was going on. Overall, this was a very fun story to read, and I’m really glad you published it. I really do want to read more of your stories and encourage you to write more. Feel free to visit my drone discord, which is a writing channel. Might give you inspiration. Link is in my GSS profile.