Recent Comments

11/18/22, 9:32 PM
Yes! I am so happy to see this story continuing. By this point, Brody is too far down the rabbit hole. So I am eager to see how he is taken further down spiral. How much more can the coach control him? How much more will his secret admirer and wrestling rival use him? Because I don't see Brody being free at the end of the year as the coach said. May I recommend having the coach lock him into chasity? His focus should be on serving and not off. The coach could even spin the idea to Brody's dad that it is a health measure and will improve his wrestling performance.
Nov 18, 2022
11/18/22, 7:54 PM
This was just so much fun. the hypnotic control was provocative and REALLY powerful to me. THANK YOU. I loved it.
11/18/22, 7:19 PM
I love coming back to this story over and over again!
Hypnoticus
11/18/22, 6:33 PM
I loooove this story so much! It's such a great borderline sexual but not sex. It hits on my kink exactly. THANK YOU for writing it! I hope you continue this story all the way through! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!
Tyrol
11/18/22, 10:02 AM
There's a lot in here I love. Two bottoms being romantic and sexual with each other while sharing a top, friends to lovers, tough men that are actually softies, and the very chill attitude. Nobody is uncomfortable or scared. Just positive vibes even though they're all kinda... Imprisoned? And being experimented on? Very much not something I would write but something I very much enjoy reading. Oh yeah, and the mpreg. That part is done very well.

11/18/22, 6:16 PM
@[Tyrol](/user/show/36224) I'm really glad you liked it! There's definitely going to be some fallout from this in later chapters if I can make time to write them, but you're right that it's pretty cuddly so far!
11/18/22, 6:01 AM
Very hot, and very well written.

11/18/22, 6:15 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) thanks man! I'm really glad you liked it!
mic
11/18/22, 6:06 PM
love it, please more, and more tacking everything and hypno, love it, great story
Anonymous
11/17/22, 12:20 PM
My favorite story!!

peachy
11/18/22, 5:42 PM
Thank you!
11/17/22, 4:02 AM
Great chapter I'm liking the story so far, hopefully it will continue.

peachy
11/18/22, 5:42 PM
@[luisadjani](/user/show/971980) Thank you!
11/18/22, 2:48 PM
This is really intriguing and very ... provocative. I love XANDER... I love anything to do with musk and smells. I must tell you... your writing is just easy on the reader! THANK YOU