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11/18/22, 7:19 PM
I love coming back to this story over and over again!
Hypnoticus
11/18/22, 6:33 PM
I loooove this story so much! It's such a great borderline sexual but not sex. It hits on my kink exactly. THANK YOU for writing it! I hope you continue this story all the way through! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!
Tyrol
11/18/22, 10:02 AM
There's a lot in here I love. Two bottoms being romantic and sexual with each other while sharing a top, friends to lovers, tough men that are actually softies, and the very chill attitude. Nobody is uncomfortable or scared. Just positive vibes even though they're all kinda... Imprisoned? And being experimented on? Very much not something I would write but something I very much enjoy reading. Oh yeah, and the mpreg. That part is done very well.

11/18/22, 6:16 PM
@[Tyrol](/user/show/36224) I'm really glad you liked it! There's definitely going to be some fallout from this in later chapters if I can make time to write them, but you're right that it's pretty cuddly so far!
11/18/22, 6:01 AM
Very hot, and very well written.

11/18/22, 6:15 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) thanks man! I'm really glad you liked it!
mic
11/18/22, 6:06 PM
love it, please more, and more tacking everything and hypno, love it, great story
Anonymous
11/17/22, 12:20 PM
My favorite story!!

peachy
11/18/22, 5:42 PM
Thank you!
11/17/22, 4:02 AM
Great chapter I'm liking the story so far, hopefully it will continue.

peachy
11/18/22, 5:42 PM
@[luisadjani](/user/show/971980) Thank you!
11/18/22, 2:48 PM
This is really intriguing and very ... provocative. I love XANDER... I love anything to do with musk and smells. I must tell you... your writing is just easy on the reader! THANK YOU
Nov 18, 2022
11/18/22, 2:23 PM
hot
Zai
11/18/22, 11:18 AM
Much of a *DICKtator', Lex? Huh? Yeah, you bald, *albeit hot*, bastard stud! But I absolutely enjoyed the curveball lobbed by Rico right at Lex; nearly braining the head honcho, the lead man, the fearless leader, *The top dog Master!* Annnnnndddd, about curveballs, SuperDude? There were several, here, as you well now know. As you wrote, you shocked yourself with the curveball content of this chapter. However, the biggest curveball was that damn cliffhanger chapters end! You're just are an outright cock-tease, SuperLEX!!! *seriously peeved lol'ing...* Because is Rico actually proving himself a challenge to Lex as the #1 Master? I'm thinking... yeeeaaahhh... duh, lol!!! Not only did he unchain, uncage and uncollar SuperBottomBoi, without Lex Luthor's apparent permission, but you left us with Rico dicking *HIS* SUPREMA-MARICONA! And I bet That was without the Sir's consent, either! You packed a lotta drama here, SuperDude, a great Deal of *dun, dun, dun...* One major issue I have with Rico comparing his superhero boi-toys like apples to oranges. Because he thought that Superman was the stronger of heroes he bitched? Oh Hell, No Rico! I feel in many ways, both Superman AND Batman are equals. But! Superman has been in slave training to bottom for awhile, and he's been through the ringer of drugs, varied Special-K (Kryptonite), mental and physical indoctrination, etc, etc. But it took Bitching Pills, booze and some clever manipulating by Rico to bitch the Dark Knight. So quickly. The argument could be made that Batman gave up his mouth & cunt up to Rico far faster than Superman got cherry popped. On the coin toss, Superman is a Kryptonian and Batman human. So in certain ways the flyboi is stronger; then again apples to oranges... ... ... I called it, Bitches! I knew Zod was Python's daddy; of a sort, lol! Now I'm left to ponder - just who is attempting to build up a superhero bitch harem? As an aside note!? I'd enjoy Aquaman getting bitched, too! The blonde Adonis stud in his skintight green and orange costume that shows off the pretty-boi's physique. Especially his epic ass & bulge. Don't get me wrong, I think Jason Mamoa is a kickass, awesome Aquaman. But I loves me the classic blonde model Aquaman getting bitched. C & C, Sir SuperDude! 😎😛😉💣💥⚾️👅

11/18/22, 2:02 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) G'Mornin ZAI!! THANK YOU 4 ALL of your positive comments!! SO GLAD U Enjoyed this chapter-- YES, there sure were A LOT of "curveballs"!!:baseball: I'm currently debating on exactly how Chapter 22 will UNFOLD....a lot of balls in the air moving forward!!:thinking: Lex will hardly allow the blatant insolence from Rico...right?!??!:rage: But HOW, Praytel, how will he retaliate!?!?:smiling_imp: Only time will tell, my dear friend!!:8ball: Have a SUPA-weekend!:sunglasses: