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Anonymous
11/18/22, 7:26 AM
No chance for Rob to fight back against his transformation? Can’t wait to see Harry “tutor” Rob to be like him :)

Anonymous
11/18/22, 8:13 AM
I am sure it’s almost complete now, and there was some fight-back, both in this chapter and the previous ones.
Zai
11/18/22, 8:08 AM
Damn Spell check! That fracking program changes words outta the blue. I wrote - '...have one *of* our hung guys...,' not, '...have one *off* our hung guys...' *exasperated sigh* I *Dick*stinctly enjoy our word play, yeah? Oh, yeah! Loud lol'ing!!! Cheers, mate!
Zai
11/18/22, 7:55 AM
Yes! *happy fist-pumping* Chapter 22! Soon, oh so soon, 21, here I come! And you deserve fair and truly honest praise, SUPERDUDE!! I'm still wondering when my story will appear? 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
11/16/22, 6:06 PM
That was really awesome . Was also wondering if you gonna write anymore about the detectives In the haunted house . Loved that one tooo ☺️

11/17/22, 4:01 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Thanks! The next Household Spirits chapter just needs some polish. Maybe next month?

11/18/22, 7:44 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Omg that’s awesome !!! Thank you . Thanks again for this awesome story too
Nov 12, 2022
11/18/22, 6:52 AM
Hot. Although I would've hoped for some more development regarding the dynamic between the protagonist and Kyle, some chastity maybe? The premise is so good.
11/18/22, 5:22 AM
The dynamic between Booker and Jace is so so good. Booker (and Greek who I’m excited to see what part she plays) being the one to protect and look out for the big ol’ himbo is precious and I hope he retains some of that even as he most likely transforms into a much more alpha-oriented stud and Jace transitions into a sub bottom. You are by far the best at writing these transformations that I’ve encountered and, as in the case of magical textbook, have a great ability to infuse *just* the right amount of romanticism while keeping it filthy and hot as fuck. Cannot WAIT to see where this one goes.

11/18/22, 6:23 AM
@[tumnus](/user/show/917823) You flatter me! Hopefully I can live up to the expectations of romantic/smut balance.
Nutiper
11/18/22, 5:21 AM
I'll throw in my vote and say: it would absolutely be fun to see Jace have some enjoyable kinky times under Lewis at some point, but along with _plenty_ of Booker as well. I mean, why choose... Why not both! Booker and Jace's dynamic is so good, and very sweet. And it seems likely they'll end up together by the end. I can't wait to see more of the two of them interacting! But the story is also hinting strongly at a harem-like scenario where Jace isn't sticking solely with Booker. And if that's the case, I'm definitely excited to see some scenes with Lewis too. Honestly though, I'll read whatever you write and be glad for it. Don't take the comment-voting too seriously, and just write whatever you have in mind. I'm super excited to read it!

11/18/22, 6:20 AM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Por que no los dos?
Anonymous
11/18/22, 1:54 AM
I’m gonna sorta echo a previous comment and say I’m team Lewis hahaha. He’s just the right amount of smug that the cockiness is hot rather than asshole-ish. Hope he gets to dick down Jace.

11/18/22, 6:16 AM
Glad he's sticking out as a character!
11/17/22, 10:10 PM
Yay the full episode! It's very interesting (even if it was frustrating that we were denied the full action). Jace is just a precious boy with good intentions. The frat give him too much shit and he deserves more ~~(dicks)~~ I do hope the end result won't be that Jace won't lose all his intelligence permanently. Fucked silly is fun, but being destroyed forever is not so much. Also, I don't like Lewis. He's a douchebag and I hope Booker and or Greek will punch him in his face. Waiting for the next chapter! :)

11/18/22, 6:15 AM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) Thanks! I'm hoping to play with the heat of dumbing down without too much of the horror of long-term consequences here (same with another WIP...). It works great in shorter works, but it's harder to pull off in longer works
11/17/22, 8:59 PM
I waited a few days to read this because I knew I would like it. And of course I did. I love the narrator being the himbo. I love his roommate being gay and in love with him. I love the frat house setup. And I love the demon living in him now. I’m really excited to read more.

11/18/22, 6:10 AM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) :heart: I always appreciate your detailed comments! I have lots of ideas bouncing around for this. Just need to get through November.