Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/18/22, 1:54 AM
I’m gonna sorta echo a previous comment and say I’m team Lewis hahaha. He’s just the right amount of smug that the cockiness is hot rather than asshole-ish. Hope he gets to dick down Jace.

11/18/22, 6:16 AM
Glad he's sticking out as a character!
11/17/22, 10:10 PM
Yay the full episode! It's very interesting (even if it was frustrating that we were denied the full action). Jace is just a precious boy with good intentions. The frat give him too much shit and he deserves more ~~(dicks)~~ I do hope the end result won't be that Jace won't lose all his intelligence permanently. Fucked silly is fun, but being destroyed forever is not so much. Also, I don't like Lewis. He's a douchebag and I hope Booker and or Greek will punch him in his face. Waiting for the next chapter! :)

11/18/22, 6:15 AM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) Thanks! I'm hoping to play with the heat of dumbing down without too much of the horror of long-term consequences here (same with another WIP...). It works great in shorter works, but it's harder to pull off in longer works
11/17/22, 8:59 PM
I waited a few days to read this because I knew I would like it. And of course I did. I love the narrator being the himbo. I love his roommate being gay and in love with him. I love the frat house setup. And I love the demon living in him now. I’m really excited to read more.

11/18/22, 6:10 AM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) :heart: I always appreciate your detailed comments! I have lots of ideas bouncing around for this. Just need to get through November.
Haruspex
11/18/22, 3:08 AM
Strangely ethical in a way I wasn't expecting! A lot of straight-to-gay type stories can occasionally make the process feel nonconsensual in a way that I don't necessarily think is intended--I think it can be hot when the writer is purposefully writing with that as a theme, but other times it's just so weird and uncomfortable to read that I've gotta tab out. But the clear camaraderie and affection everyone showed was lovely, moreso since you implanted the seeds (haha) throughout the story of the groups all bonding naturally. They didn't know what they were getting into, but even though there was clearly a strong level of influence sexually, it doesn't feel implausible that things wouldn't have gone to that level eventually. Bowen acting like a happy labrador was what sold it--the facade of that unnerving soldier giving way to absolute giddy affection and genuine care was a delight to see even just purely as a narrative thing. As always, love your work!

11/18/22, 4:11 AM
@[Haruspex](/user/show/908250) thanks man! I'm actually writing the next chapter at least in part with some of that in mind - and Bowen as a big ol' happy guard dog is definitely the vibe I was going for! I'm hoping to bring that in for a landing for you with the next chapter, too!
11/17/22, 11:14 PM
Honestly, with everything that happened so far, I'm kind of disappointed in Brandon and Dylan getting controlled~ It feels very repetitive like this, even if the "master" is different~ I was just really hoping Dylan and Brandon would find out about Larry sooner somehow and get him under control too~

11/18/22, 2:47 AM
@[Tempest888](/user/show/908611) Keep reading. Larry's plans for D&B aren't quite what you think.
Hank
11/15/22, 7:29 AM
Extremely intense erotica. Loved the detail descriptions of the mental emotional and physical responses. The ending was a clever sensual twist. Will Julio return for another session? I would!

11/18/22, 2:21 AM
@Hank Thanks for the review.
11/18/22, 1:12 AM
i honestly wish I could meet someone with your incredible creativity and ... DANG ... I feel your beautiful passion and sexuality. I love this story.
11/18/22, 12:24 AM
okay - you are brilliant. JUST brilliant. this is so sweet.
Fern
11/17/22, 8:38 PM
Man I LOVE this series and chapter but part of me is definitely a bit disappointed we’re back to tormenting Dylan and Brandon. I know they aren’t good dudes but I was digging them being in the controlling position for once. I also would’ve liked it if they had actually did some of the “permanent” things that had planned for Eric (rather than just mention them) because it was all so good! Looking forward ti the next chapter of this amazing series as always but it’s bittersweet to return to someone else pulling the strings.

11/18/22, 12:22 AM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Just wait until the next chapter. Larry's plans for Dylan and Brandon aren't quite what you think.
11/17/22, 11:56 PM
i want to suck so badly on his teet.