Recent Comments

11/18/22, 5:22 AM
The dynamic between Booker and Jace is so so good. Booker (and Greek who I’m excited to see what part she plays) being the one to protect and look out for the big ol’ himbo is precious and I hope he retains some of that even as he most likely transforms into a much more alpha-oriented stud and Jace transitions into a sub bottom. You are by far the best at writing these transformations that I’ve encountered and, as in the case of magical textbook, have a great ability to infuse *just* the right amount of romanticism while keeping it filthy and hot as fuck. Cannot WAIT to see where this one goes.

11/18/22, 6:23 AM
@[tumnus](/user/show/917823) You flatter me! Hopefully I can live up to the expectations of romantic/smut balance.
Nutiper
11/18/22, 5:21 AM
I'll throw in my vote and say: it would absolutely be fun to see Jace have some enjoyable kinky times under Lewis at some point, but along with _plenty_ of Booker as well. I mean, why choose... Why not both! Booker and Jace's dynamic is so good, and very sweet. And it seems likely they'll end up together by the end. I can't wait to see more of the two of them interacting! But the story is also hinting strongly at a harem-like scenario where Jace isn't sticking solely with Booker. And if that's the case, I'm definitely excited to see some scenes with Lewis too. Honestly though, I'll read whatever you write and be glad for it. Don't take the comment-voting too seriously, and just write whatever you have in mind. I'm super excited to read it!

11/18/22, 6:20 AM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Por que no los dos?
Anonymous
11/18/22, 1:54 AM
I’m gonna sorta echo a previous comment and say I’m team Lewis hahaha. He’s just the right amount of smug that the cockiness is hot rather than asshole-ish. Hope he gets to dick down Jace.

11/18/22, 6:16 AM
Glad he's sticking out as a character!
11/17/22, 10:10 PM
Yay the full episode! It's very interesting (even if it was frustrating that we were denied the full action). Jace is just a precious boy with good intentions. The frat give him too much shit and he deserves more ~~(dicks)~~ I do hope the end result won't be that Jace won't lose all his intelligence permanently. Fucked silly is fun, but being destroyed forever is not so much. Also, I don't like Lewis. He's a douchebag and I hope Booker and or Greek will punch him in his face. Waiting for the next chapter! :)

11/18/22, 6:15 AM
@[easdf](/user/show/780823) Thanks! I'm hoping to play with the heat of dumbing down without too much of the horror of long-term consequences here (same with another WIP...). It works great in shorter works, but it's harder to pull off in longer works
11/17/22, 8:59 PM
I waited a few days to read this because I knew I would like it. And of course I did. I love the narrator being the himbo. I love his roommate being gay and in love with him. I love the frat house setup. And I love the demon living in him now. I’m really excited to read more.

11/18/22, 6:10 AM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) :heart: I always appreciate your detailed comments! I have lots of ideas bouncing around for this. Just need to get through November.
Haruspex
11/18/22, 3:08 AM
Strangely ethical in a way I wasn't expecting! A lot of straight-to-gay type stories can occasionally make the process feel nonconsensual in a way that I don't necessarily think is intended--I think it can be hot when the writer is purposefully writing with that as a theme, but other times it's just so weird and uncomfortable to read that I've gotta tab out. But the clear camaraderie and affection everyone showed was lovely, moreso since you implanted the seeds (haha) throughout the story of the groups all bonding naturally. They didn't know what they were getting into, but even though there was clearly a strong level of influence sexually, it doesn't feel implausible that things wouldn't have gone to that level eventually. Bowen acting like a happy labrador was what sold it--the facade of that unnerving soldier giving way to absolute giddy affection and genuine care was a delight to see even just purely as a narrative thing. As always, love your work!

11/18/22, 4:11 AM
@[Haruspex](/user/show/908250) thanks man! I'm actually writing the next chapter at least in part with some of that in mind - and Bowen as a big ol' happy guard dog is definitely the vibe I was going for! I'm hoping to bring that in for a landing for you with the next chapter, too!
11/17/22, 11:14 PM
Honestly, with everything that happened so far, I'm kind of disappointed in Brandon and Dylan getting controlled~ It feels very repetitive like this, even if the "master" is different~ I was just really hoping Dylan and Brandon would find out about Larry sooner somehow and get him under control too~

11/18/22, 2:47 AM
@[Tempest888](/user/show/908611) Keep reading. Larry's plans for D&B aren't quite what you think.
Hank
11/15/22, 7:29 AM
Extremely intense erotica. Loved the detail descriptions of the mental emotional and physical responses. The ending was a clever sensual twist. Will Julio return for another session? I would!

11/18/22, 2:21 AM
@Hank Thanks for the review.
11/18/22, 1:12 AM
i honestly wish I could meet someone with your incredible creativity and ... DANG ... I feel your beautiful passion and sexuality. I love this story.
11/18/22, 12:24 AM
okay - you are brilliant. JUST brilliant. this is so sweet.