I love these boys, their dynamic, and this story. Couldn’t be more charmed. Can’t wait to see Bookerace (Jooker?) complete this dance of Greek magic and himbofucking.

This is off to a really fun start and I'm looking forward to seeing what (or who) comes next! I love the lore of this story so far.

This is such a good story. I really loved the pacing and the changes that took place. The teasing too, all the potential sexual situations that don't quite eventuate. Truly tantalizing and evil. But then, if the urges and activity results in powerful for a spell it's best not to rush such things. I'm very excited to see where it goes.

First, very hot opening I'm really excited to see where these characters are going. Second, thanks to this fic I now know what callipygian means lmao

You’re the best writer of himbo, jock stories. I love your writing so fucking much. This is already a new favorite, it’s so hot!!! Can’t wait for more

Tantalizing AND intriguing. Oh this is going to be good!

love it

Super hot - I'd also love a second part and how it continues. Especially with Greg.

Really enjoying this!

I didn't enjoy this part as much as the previous ones. From the standpoint of advancing the story I thought it worked okay. Gabriel has his consciousness back and he has transformation powers and he needs to explore them. However that exploration is what didn't really work so well for me. I think both you the author and your character were very hesitant about randomly messing with a guy and I think you kind of forced it to go through even though it didn't feel authentic. I think I would have liked this chapter better if the target declined to accept the permanent changes and reverted on the spot. I don't think that I buy that a random guy at a club is really into being turned into a drone. I buy that the guy is horny for the very tall muscular man who appears to just be wearing a fetish outfit. I buy that he's horny for a guy who is either wearing a sheath or has a dildo that is gorgeous attached to his kinky suit. I can buy him being somewhat dominated into trying on the hood, and the scene where Gabriel pushed his face into Gabriel's big packs to seal the mask was pretty hot. But once the subject started to fight and obviously be scared well... It didn't feel authentic after that point. Being controlled and dominated by a really hot guy is one thing but being permanently rubberized is a big step. In the previous chapter, Austin clearly already had an interest in it. That's why he hired Gabriel to rubberize his boyfriend (intention for how long and how permanent it would be still unclear). So I could buy him not being able to fight the process himself. I would also buy it more if the guy in this chapter experienced additional transformations that made it hot such as cock growth or improved musculature. But I think he just had it flow around his body and shrink tight which didn't seem as fun. Anyway I hope this is constructive and not overly harsh. I am really looking forward to how the story continues to unfold.