Super hot - I'd also love a second part and how it continues. Especially with Greg.

Really enjoying this!

I didn't enjoy this part as much as the previous ones. From the standpoint of advancing the story I thought it worked okay. Gabriel has his consciousness back and he has transformation powers and he needs to explore them. However that exploration is what didn't really work so well for me. I think both you the author and your character were very hesitant about randomly messing with a guy and I think you kind of forced it to go through even though it didn't feel authentic. I think I would have liked this chapter better if the target declined to accept the permanent changes and reverted on the spot. I don't think that I buy that a random guy at a club is really into being turned into a drone. I buy that the guy is horny for the very tall muscular man who appears to just be wearing a fetish outfit. I buy that he's horny for a guy who is either wearing a sheath or has a dildo that is gorgeous attached to his kinky suit. I can buy him being somewhat dominated into trying on the hood, and the scene where Gabriel pushed his face into Gabriel's big packs to seal the mask was pretty hot. But once the subject started to fight and obviously be scared well... It didn't feel authentic after that point. Being controlled and dominated by a really hot guy is one thing but being permanently rubberized is a big step. In the previous chapter, Austin clearly already had an interest in it. That's why he hired Gabriel to rubberize his boyfriend (intention for how long and how permanent it would be still unclear). So I could buy him not being able to fight the process himself. I would also buy it more if the guy in this chapter experienced additional transformations that made it hot such as cock growth or improved musculature. But I think he just had it flow around his body and shrink tight which didn't seem as fun. Anyway I hope this is constructive and not overly harsh. I am really looking forward to how the story continues to unfold.

The side effects -- just effects? -- of the medication overwhelming them with desire and wanting to be fucked by Bowen was really hot. The ignoring of any thoughts relating to taboo and just enjoying each other was great. You really conveyed the intensity of the desires well too. The facility as a whole also felt good. While the other characters haven't had a lot to do they feel like they have their own backgrounds and stories and aren't just there for plot but that they are all friends now.

Love Miguel

Fantastic, great to see the pictures fitting in with the story, as hot as hell

Please learn how to use quotation marks for dialogue.

I think the lead in to Len's pregnancy act and then him breastfeeding Jake is my favorite sequence from the whole story, that's some deliciously pervy stuff. I think he has one more scene coming up that I also liked.

Hey, this is really great stuff! Would love to see more chapters if you’ve got ideas!

Hey, Mithrasity! Wel-cum back! I'd say poor lil' Brody, but by now, the jock slut is completely & utterly BITCHED! The dude craves/needs cock and cum like his body needs oxygen! That hot and slutty gal, Jessica? If that big titted bimbo couldn't get Brody raising the flag and saluting, then no girl ever will! Brody is now a 100% prime, cunted jock-bitch boi! Just as fate intended! Mr. Cabot both got a special treat so far, this day. I wonder how many more loads the jock-whore will take by late evening, huh? Lastly, I do so hope you soon have a fitter, sexier Hank becoming a bitched out, sub bottom cock lover like his son. Jock-Daddy-Slut seems a great moniker for him. I really, really want him cunted by that Asian muscle stud, Tyler. Tyler of the huge cock, who needs to finally conquer his own personal, bitched out hunk! Thanks, Dude! 😊🤗😎😛😜😝