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Anonymous
4/17/25, 4:47 PM
Update new chapter please
4/12/25, 4:49 AM
Well, now I wonder, if Pavel and his kids join the Empire, how will they react to learning Nicolai is with the Depth Dwellers.

Pcm
4/17/25, 4:32 PM
@[luisadjani](/user/show/971980) Probably tries to take him back and make him join the empire
Zander
4/17/25, 9:34 AM
Thank you, we are waiting for the continuation) I hope the chapters will be longer and there will be more eroticism.

4/17/25, 2:24 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks :)
4/17/25, 8:00 AM
Glad this is a "draft." The term masseuse is a French word that refers to a female who practices massage. (Males in the industry were known as masseurs.)

4/17/25, 1:58 PM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) The change has been made.
4/17/25, 2:53 AM
Yes! I've been enjoying this series so much!

4/17/25, 12:32 PM
@[Bannanimal](/user/show/10020816) I just can't give them up. It's a wonderful mash-up of superheroics, erotica, and mythology, my three favorite things. I'm four books in with plans for at least two more -- but I can't imagine that to be the end of it. There is an even greater joy in discovering an international reading audience. It's very heady to discover fans in Australia and Japan and the EU -- the KDP tracker allows me to see sales and track them till my anal-retentive heart is content. It's just mind-boggling to me.
4/17/25, 9:09 AM
Looking great so far. I think the slow progress is a very good idea, transformations that are too fast leave little space to immerse the reader in the change. The small changes give you lots of space to ramp up slowly. I always like a bit of tension in stories - that is, that there is some uncertainty of outcome. When its an all powerful force with no way to fail, that's not as interesting as something that might fail, can be resisted, and you read on to see if it will succeed. Big fan of strong lads who might normally be able to escape their fate being taken advantage of because they're asleep, stories of picking people off one by one undetected, and friends corrupting friends too. But that's just me, you should write what you love mate.
Feb 4, 2025
4/17/25, 4:44 AM
Keep coming back to this one. Really hope you’ll continue it!

4/17/25, 8:28 AM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) Thanks! I had some ideas to continue it with Rob and new couples with each story (or maybe someone by themself) but I've got so many ideas and only so much time. This year I'm going to make more of an effort to write more and try and monetize it so I have an excuse to spend more time writing and work on some of the longer story ideas I have
Leo
4/17/25, 7:21 AM
Please continue this story! I absolutely love it!
4/17/25, 3:58 AM
Sounds like a nice house.
4/17/25, 3:15 AM
We need to know what's in that oil! Great story to a classic theme. You pulled all the stops.