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11/15/22, 12:00 AM
can't wait for more.
11/14/22, 11:49 PM
hottt
Nov 12, 2022
Anonymous
11/14/22, 8:11 PM
If you’re on Discord, you should drop a handle. Someone may commission a piece from you. These writings are so good

11/14/22, 10:03 PM
Thank you! I am on Discord, but it’s my very sfw art account.

11/14/22, 10:37 PM
@[Wakeup ](/user/show/353704) I know I’d pay up to $150 for something short. Hope you’ll consider a Patreon or similar
Evan
11/14/22, 9:34 AM
This was a superb chapter. Smart, cunning, and with all the fun we come to expect. Great solution to getting Flow back and one of the Blurs too. The feedback loop of belonging to one another is sweet. I actually feel a little bad for the new Archie never getting a reward for a job well done. Such torment. Perhaps worse than something the cold anti-Flow would have done. It's been quite a ride, this series, and this chapter blew everything out of the water. Amazing.

11/14/22, 2:49 PM
@[Evan](/user/show/133763) We'll see what happens with Archie. Maybe he'll get a happy ending, I don't know yet. The 'new' Flow is still finding his heroic feet again. Thanks for the support and I hope the next chapter continues to please!

Evan
11/14/22, 9:40 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) I have every confidence that it will. You've really put in a lot of work with this series and it shows. It's a great read. I, personally, get some extra enjoyment out of a few of them getting their own selves (or a variation) back and how the experience has still changed them and where they go from here. Whether it's Wellspring wanting to become a permanent sub slave, 07 Craig being a villain and reveling in depravity, or Ian and Craig programming one another to be what they couldn't bring themselves to be when they were just heroes and mentor/protege.
Lampshade15
11/14/22, 8:07 PM
Jesus, this chapter was amazing! Love the daddy stuff and the suit fuck with Drew also being naked. Wouldn't mind seeing Jiang fuck both Lyle and Drew to show them their rightful place in the household.
11/14/22, 7:48 PM
Of course the families should be allowed to take their love to the next level but perhaps the same end resultat could be achieved without another round of house calls. I fear it would be diminishing returns. I also thought you were holding out on the buttsex because Peter and Blake should have the honour of being the first to take that step.
11/12/22, 4:25 PM
So, when I envisioned this story months and months ago, the plot of it came to me up to this exact point. Writing is slow. But, that being said, I haven't yet put the thought into what the plot will do from here. I'll probably decide in the next little bit how I want things to go, but if you're the sort who has a wish for this series, now's the time to let it be heard! I can't promise I'll take any suggestions, but who knows? Maybe something you say will influence the lives of Tanner's growing flock. Thanks for reading!

11/13/22, 11:48 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) personally I love when guys get into thongs so if one of the sub/btm guys ends up with a bit of a feminization bend to it that might be hot. Would be nice to see some of the other progress further too like the son who gets bound by his daddy (maybe it progresses to chastity a bit or just moves to fucking? So far I think the dad just plays with his hole). Maybe it's like that dad's new addiction becomes restraining and controlling the son when at home (could also see it become like a forced pup play sort of thing). But it's your story and think your work is so consistently amazing!

11/14/22, 4:20 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Bondage isn't really my thing but I do like it on its way to other things that are. Certainly there's room here to play around with that--so many different possibilities with all these handsome fathers and sons running around.

11/14/22, 6:31 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) On the topic of Bondage maybe Peter could suggest a role playing exercise in the Sacred Circle reenacting the story of Abraham and Isaac as an excuse to tie his son down while the rest of the group watches.
11/13/22, 2:40 AM
Well, the predictable end would be either Tanner's triumph (most predictable) or the opposite - Tanner's plan, whatever it is, is foiled by Blake and the orange cat (who seemed pretty lame so far, so it would require a lot of work). I wouldn't go either way. My end would be Tanner **mostly** getting his way, but getting carried away and losing control of his flock to Pastor Pete. I've noticed that Tanner kept himself mostly out of the action so far, with the exception of one kiss. Maybe there's a good reason for that that's related to his powers. Tanner could end as Pete and Blake's third/plaything. I do enjoy seeing arrogant smug characters fall on their faces, and it wouldn't be such a bad fate for him. Just not the one he wanted as he'd no longer be in control. Pastor Pete would continue taking care of his community.. only in quite a different fashion.

11/13/22, 4:57 AM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I also like it when no one gets exactly what they’re aiming for. Peter as the leader of the group post-Tanner would leave the door open for a sequel…or a later series chronicling another group Tanner interacts with. Hmm…thanks for the suggestion!

11/13/22, 7:45 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) I actually have a more detailed scenario in mind if that interests you. I don't want to write it here because a. it's too long b. it may spoil the end and c. maybe you don't want more than a general idea. It's up to you. I could DM to you if you want.

11/13/22, 3:47 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I second this. It would be sweet, sweet irony if Peter ends up being so perverted that even Tanner ends up at his mercy. The end goal should be Peter back in charge of his community - only with a rather different mindset for all involved :-)

11/14/22, 4:08 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I love talking and brainstorming things, as long as you're comfy if I choose to say: "You have a great idea that I cannot write because of my own thoughts about this piece, but I welcome fan fiction of this universe if you want to write it!" DMs always open to charming dudes, and I'm interested in your thoughts on the shape of this going forward. :)

11/14/22, 5:53 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) But of course. Your story, your end.
Elm
11/14/22, 5:36 PM
One of the best stories in this site!
Sep 28, 2021
10/20/22, 12:49 PM
Amazing. Just read it and I’m so turned on thinking about my booty blowing up like that and becoming sexually activated and the rest of my body shrinking down as my peachy bottom peaches out. I just read it? Just like the hot straight guy just in the story was reading it like me. I wanted to write and say how very cool this idea is. Thank you.

11/13/22, 5:57 PM
@[RiverRhode](/user/show/241400) Thanks for the comment! If you liked this, you might like the "Bubble" stories on GSS that inspired me.

Anonymous
11/14/22, 5:31 PM
Thank You! I will look for that, now! I appreciate you. @[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367)