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11/13/22, 2:40 AM
Well, the predictable end would be either Tanner's triumph (most predictable) or the opposite - Tanner's plan, whatever it is, is foiled by Blake and the orange cat (who seemed pretty lame so far, so it would require a lot of work). I wouldn't go either way. My end would be Tanner **mostly** getting his way, but getting carried away and losing control of his flock to Pastor Pete. I've noticed that Tanner kept himself mostly out of the action so far, with the exception of one kiss. Maybe there's a good reason for that that's related to his powers. Tanner could end as Pete and Blake's third/plaything. I do enjoy seeing arrogant smug characters fall on their faces, and it wouldn't be such a bad fate for him. Just not the one he wanted as he'd no longer be in control. Pastor Pete would continue taking care of his community.. only in quite a different fashion.

11/13/22, 4:57 AM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I also like it when no one gets exactly what they’re aiming for. Peter as the leader of the group post-Tanner would leave the door open for a sequel…or a later series chronicling another group Tanner interacts with. Hmm…thanks for the suggestion!

11/13/22, 7:45 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) I actually have a more detailed scenario in mind if that interests you. I don't want to write it here because a. it's too long b. it may spoil the end and c. maybe you don't want more than a general idea. It's up to you. I could DM to you if you want.

11/13/22, 3:47 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I second this. It would be sweet, sweet irony if Peter ends up being so perverted that even Tanner ends up at his mercy. The end goal should be Peter back in charge of his community - only with a rather different mindset for all involved :-)

11/14/22, 4:08 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I love talking and brainstorming things, as long as you're comfy if I choose to say: "You have a great idea that I cannot write because of my own thoughts about this piece, but I welcome fan fiction of this universe if you want to write it!" DMs always open to charming dudes, and I'm interested in your thoughts on the shape of this going forward. :)

11/14/22, 5:53 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) But of course. Your story, your end.
Elm
11/14/22, 5:36 PM
One of the best stories in this site!
Sep 28, 2021
10/20/22, 12:49 PM
Amazing. Just read it and I’m so turned on thinking about my booty blowing up like that and becoming sexually activated and the rest of my body shrinking down as my peachy bottom peaches out. I just read it? Just like the hot straight guy just in the story was reading it like me. I wanted to write and say how very cool this idea is. Thank you.

11/13/22, 5:57 PM
@[RiverRhode](/user/show/241400) Thanks for the comment! If you liked this, you might like the "Bubble" stories on GSS that inspired me.

Anonymous
11/14/22, 5:31 PM
Thank You! I will look for that, now! I appreciate you. @[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367)
Anonymous
11/14/22, 4:39 PM
so hot... love the character descriptions too!!!

11/14/22, 4:52 PM
@[olympic678](/user/show/1108978) thanks! Glad to know this series is still getting some love…it’s one of my (personal) favorites
Nov 15, 2022
11/14/22, 4:37 PM
It's taken a while, but now the adventure of Ethan and Josh continues! I was planning to have this finished in October, but then other things got in the way. I hope you enjoy it! I really like feedback, so rate it, favorite it if you want, and post a comment! Any thoughts on how it could have been better? And if you like my writing and would like to encourage me to get some of those other things out of the way, so I can write more? I'm glad you asked - I've set up a Ko-fi account, so feel free to drop me a tip there! https://ko-fi.com/dobedo Thanks for reading!
11/14/22, 4:23 PM
I was hoping a twist like this would happen! I love stories where people become victims of their own fantasies or eagerness. Very hot.
11/14/22, 2:10 AM
A series that continues to arouse you further each time, upping the ante of what's to come. Can't wait to see where it goes, but I do hope Tanner gets away with it. I hope we get to see the next meeting of the group and have Tanner have the guys catch up, share, and enjoy themselves. Blake and Peter need an encore, no doubt. Thank you for another amazing story, can't wait to see what's next.

11/14/22, 4:21 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thanks, Essex! I'm glad that the ante is going upward--that's the direction I always hope for. I can't help feeling a little bad for Drew, though--maybe the cat will come in and give him some loving sex too? Not sure how but it's a possibility. Hmmm...
11/13/22, 6:59 PM
Loved that Lyle was obedient to Jiang.... Would love to see some bottom daddy action!

11/14/22, 4:08 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) I think Lyle will be, at very least. Certainly Jiang seems to enjoy being "on top", so to speak.
11/13/22, 3:41 PM
This is without a doubt the best story on this site for quite some time. Thank you so much S.Q Neemie. I would like a new meeting in the Sacred Circle so Tanner can distribute some more perverted wisdom to the group. This would also be a great way to showcase the change in Peter. I can imagine him being more active in his support of Tanners ideas rather than trying to oppose them. Maybe even spread some of his own ideas with Tanners help. From the very start of this story I have seen the Sacred Circle as the perfect setup for a circle jerk. The guys have already openly talked about masturbation. How much more do they have to be pushed before they actually do it right there in the circle? As you must be aware of by now, Peter is by far my favorite. We last saw him planning more hidden cameras. Hopefully his new online friends gets to watch Blake naked again soon. The next step must be to not only spy on naked Blake but naked AND HARD Blake. Would Peter be able to orchestrate events so that his son is tricked into jerking off either in the shower or in his room. I am sure Peters friends online would enjoy that.

11/14/22, 4:06 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Thanks! I really appreciate how willing you are to talk about how the different chapters "grab" you, so to speak. We'll definitely return to the Sacred Circle soon, now that all the guys have had their...ahem...first experiences...
11/14/22, 3:52 PM
I like how Dave was also changed by proxy