Recent Comments

Evan
11/14/22, 10:05 AM
Love the premise. Look forward to seeing the results.
11/10/22, 2:40 PM
Will there be more.

11/14/22, 8:35 AM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) There will be! Got plenty more ideas for poor little Jake…
11/14/22, 8:02 AM
I liked this story and it was really hot, but I really wasn’t a fan of this ending. It just doesn’t feel right with me that Dr. X isn’t the one enjoying the McBride brothers and that he falls under the power of a character that was only properly introduced last chapter. It also feels weird that the “out of my lane” voice was trying to get Dr. X to enslave Brendan to himself only to make him enslaved to another guy in the end? Also Dr. X has been training for years in hypnosis and is meant to have a gift with it in putting men under, and yet he falls under Cody’s control that quickly? Again I know this sounds largely negative but I did really really enjoy the story up until when Cody was introduced.
11/13/22, 1:25 PM
What a wholesome chapter! Nyx is definitely becoming my favorite, though I'm willing to guess that Oak is going to give a fight for that title is the next chapter. I remember that Ruby is a psychologist, but I'm not sure if we know that the rest of the pack do for a living. Can't wait to read the rest! P.S. you have a few typos in this chapter. They're really minor but I thought you might like to know... - "letting his head rest against the crook of his elbow against his chest" (at least I think there's a grammar mistake here) - "He’s been decently behaved but he’s got a ways to go" (way shouldn't be plural) - "And Alphas gonna try to see if my stud pup can give him a litter tonight" (you're missing the ' in alpha's and pretty sure it's supposed to be "his stud" not "my stud" since he is talking in third person)

11/14/22, 6:56 AM
Went and fixed those. Thanks!!!@[easdf](/user/show/780823)
11/14/22, 6:40 AM
I've come back to this story so many times. I wish your website was still up so I could read your other work
Mar 29, 2020
Anonymous
11/14/22, 4:40 AM
PLEASE I NEED MORE.!!!
11/14/22, 3:34 AM
I once wrote a story and learned something regarding massages. A masseuse is a woman trained or specialized in given massages. A masseur is a man that's specializes in this same profession. When I saw the title for this story, I instantly thought the author made a similar mistake that I did.
11/14/22, 3:30 AM
An incredibly creative, fun, and HOT story. Loved it!
Evan
11/14/22, 2:16 AM
I really love this series. Having a martial art used for getting guys off is enticing. And how nice to have a way to get in without violence. ;) Looking forward to the next chapter and the progression of the mystery.