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11/14/22, 8:02 AM
I liked this story and it was really hot, but I really wasn’t a fan of this ending. It just doesn’t feel right with me that Dr. X isn’t the one enjoying the McBride brothers and that he falls under the power of a character that was only properly introduced last chapter. It also feels weird that the “out of my lane” voice was trying to get Dr. X to enslave Brendan to himself only to make him enslaved to another guy in the end? Also Dr. X has been training for years in hypnosis and is meant to have a gift with it in putting men under, and yet he falls under Cody’s control that quickly? Again I know this sounds largely negative but I did really really enjoy the story up until when Cody was introduced.
11/13/22, 1:25 PM
What a wholesome chapter! Nyx is definitely becoming my favorite, though I'm willing to guess that Oak is going to give a fight for that title is the next chapter. I remember that Ruby is a psychologist, but I'm not sure if we know that the rest of the pack do for a living. Can't wait to read the rest! P.S. you have a few typos in this chapter. They're really minor but I thought you might like to know... - "letting his head rest against the crook of his elbow against his chest" (at least I think there's a grammar mistake here) - "He’s been decently behaved but he’s got a ways to go" (way shouldn't be plural) - "And Alphas gonna try to see if my stud pup can give him a litter tonight" (you're missing the ' in alpha's and pretty sure it's supposed to be "his stud" not "my stud" since he is talking in third person)

11/14/22, 6:56 AM
Went and fixed those. Thanks!!!@[easdf](/user/show/780823)
11/14/22, 6:40 AM
I've come back to this story so many times. I wish your website was still up so I could read your other work
Mar 29, 2020
Anonymous
11/14/22, 4:40 AM
PLEASE I NEED MORE.!!!
11/14/22, 3:34 AM
I once wrote a story and learned something regarding massages. A masseuse is a woman trained or specialized in given massages. A masseur is a man that's specializes in this same profession. When I saw the title for this story, I instantly thought the author made a similar mistake that I did.
11/14/22, 3:30 AM
An incredibly creative, fun, and HOT story. Loved it!
Evan
11/14/22, 2:16 AM
I really love this series. Having a martial art used for getting guys off is enticing. And how nice to have a way to get in without violence. ;) Looking forward to the next chapter and the progression of the mystery.
4/5/21, 8:11 PM
I liked the twist at the end. Can't wait for more. Great series.

11/14/22, 2:01 AM
Replying 18 months later on a re-read. Still a great series. I would love to read the perspective of the "taking James out of the picture" as there was def another storyline running to put James with Noah, if you feel up for another chapter. Great job
11/13/22, 11:54 PM
Looking forward to seeing where this goes!