Recent Comments

11/10/22, 6:59 PM
I love how this is creepy and sexy in equal measures, and how believable Holden and Havoc’s (Holdoc? Havolden?) power struggle is. No doubt the world is in for some disruptions post-ritual.

11/13/22, 3:44 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Thank you so much! Your comments really helped me polish those aspects! 💖 Definitely looking forward to shenanigans in the sequel!
11/13/22, 3:37 AM
well i am liking this very very much
11/13/22, 3:08 AM
this was wow...i wanted and needed to read more and more...fuck
11/13/22, 2:20 AM
Great start, and quite well written. I would be interested to see where this one goes, and hope it finishes! Keep up the good work.
11/13/22, 2:13 AM
well that was something :)
11/12/22, 9:59 PM
God every chapter of this is full of both hot sex and fascinating ideas. I'm incredibly impressed to see the direction this takes, because each time comes as a surprise.

11/13/22, 1:37 AM
@[Some Guy](/user/show/10017465) Thank you! I'm just as surprised with each chapter, so we'll see what's next!
11/12/22, 6:32 PM
Fuck, what a fantastic update!! 😍

11/13/22, 1:35 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Glad you enjoyed it!
Archer19cm
11/12/22, 8:23 PM
This is fantastic for your first story. Your writing style, and the difference in the story premise, from the usual on this site, is intriguing and leaves me with a desire to see this journey unfold. Thank you for writing this delightful first episode of your series.

11/13/22, 12:00 AM
@Archer19cm Thanks a lot. In my free time I am writing a fantasy book with lgbt included, so my writing style is already set and hard to change. But because the book is in pg13 I cannot include any sex or to much nudes. But... I have soo many ideas, so I am very happy that I found some courage to write it here. Once it comes to r18 I am not sure how it would come out as it would be the first time writing scenes. If this small novel goes well, I already have "plot" prepared for a next one.
11/12/22, 11:44 PM
Nice, can't wait for more

11/12/22, 11:55 PM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed it.
11/12/22, 11:30 PM
Well, for starters, this was very well written and the base was nicely done. I would love to see where this is going and how are you gonna play with the power he has. Btw, I also love some big sub small top so, since you are saying that at the end, it fills me want to read the next chapter even more! I hope he can also get the teachers or some dads in the process too~

11/12/22, 11:54 PM
@[Udems](/user/show/16223) Well, not gonna lie, if you read between the lines here, you can already see where he will go. I mean, no spoiler, but it's here. You just have to look closer😅 And thank you for a compliment, I wrote for fun and maybe one day I will release the whole novel that I wrote on a side. It still need a lot of editing, but writing is my passion and finally I got some courage to post one of my ideas on this site. if it goes well I have soo much more prepared.