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Jack
11/9/22, 5:33 AM
This was fucking awesome! You're telling me this is your *first* story?!? Please give us more!

11/11/22, 5:54 PM
Much appreciated : ). If I do write more of this one, I might have Richard make his changes to Dave next. @[Jack](/user/show/915335)
11/9/22, 5:33 AM
Most enjoyable and sweet. Loved the relationship develop and the mc. Wished for more detail as he is turned nude by the wishes and the realization, but overall such a fun read. I do hope you write again as i would love to read from you again.

11/11/22, 5:51 PM
Ah I was wondering if should’ve added more detail at that part. I’ll keep that in mind for the future. Thanks for reading😊. I hope to write much more in the future! @[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310)

Drone NG5
11/11/22, 5:53 PM
@[Mirroredmax](/user/show/10025038) Yes, please write more! :)
11/9/22, 3:20 AM
An excellent story! I like that you seeded the narrator not being an upright person from the very beginning, with his envious thoughts. Many of these stories go for β€œpower corrupts,” so it is much more realistic to see someone who was already a bit morally nasty fall tempted to that power. Fantastic work! :D

11/11/22, 5:49 PM
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed 😊 @[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832)
Nov 11, 2022
11/11/22, 5:25 PM
I'm so invested and love their dynamic. Hopefully Darnell gets to fuck Jayden, but I wouldn't mind Jayden making Darnell his complete bitch devoted to his cock and cum. Looking forward to more! Keep up the great work.
Zai
11/11/22, 6:08 AM
Crickey! Hot Damn! My jaws, throat & backdoor are figuratively hurting in sympathetic pain for SuperBitchPup! Yowser! Ouch! *Cue sad violin music... lol, lol, lol...* 🎻 Seriously, though? It's a good thing Clark|Superman is Kryptonian. Because I'm left wondering how any human male, no matter his fitness level, could take all those huge cocks and abuse without just expiring right there & then, huh?! Methinks it might be a good idea to for Lex to give the once asexual Kryptonian some exposure to yellow sun light. Be it created rays or the actual Sun. Help to heal up the stud's body to showroom new, lol; tighten up that SupaCunt to virgin-like tightness. 🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝 Of course, Lex will be certain to have escorts there, to keep reminding the once formidable superhero about his new life; being the owned, bitched property of his Master(s). Maybe dosing him with a sweet treat infused with those special drugs. Now that, hmmm πŸ€”, once virgin to gay sex, hmmmm πŸ™„, yeahhhhh, right πŸ˜‰, Batman|Bruce has DP-d the dank vault of SupaSlut, but not been able to cum. I'm wondering what he, Jimmy, and BJ-El are going to do? What, with all three having had to vacate the arena AND SupaPup's steamy holes; just what will these three men do, huh??? Take their raging stiffies and commence into a good old fashion 3-way? If so, who'll be the spit-roast-ee, lol? Will the two younger studs turn the tables on the senior trainer, Bruce, and they become the trainers? Taking the Bat's mouth and ass-cunt out for a joyride? Begin Batman's journey into Bitch-hood? I'm surprised at Lex' diplomatic solution with Python! I smell a rat πŸ€, as in Luthor might be planning on re-training Python in the ways of the slave. Hmmmmmm... ... ... ❓❓❓ Ciao, SuperDude!

11/11/22, 3:56 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy TGIF & THANK YOU 4 your respective positive thoughts/comments-- (Chuckling)...you've given me a LOT to chew on!! It's once again ASTUTE of you to smell a rat in Luthor & ALL will eventually be revealed in the subsequent chapters!:smiling_imp: Bruce will be returning soon enough (with the 2 bois) & they will collectively have to "field an unexpected curveball"!! That's ALL I can share at this time...but I'm SO glad you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline!! ENJOY your day (& your weekend)!!:innocent:

Anonymous
11/11/22, 4:10 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hello, SuperDude! Yes, coitus Interuptous for our four sex fiends was a hoot! 4 boners, loaded balls, and no shots fired! We all know how that feels, correct? LOL! Luthor? I'll be truthful, I always like some loving feels and romance, so I was hoping the hung hunk would eventually realize he has some special πŸ’– for Superman. Of course the studly, pretty boi hero will always belong to Lex; but there's good times ahead, too! Oh yes!!! I'm in the process of publishing my first work here. I guess it goes through some review process or what? I titled it "The Croc and His Bat." It's all about Killer Croc, aka Waylon Jones bitching Batman. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸŠπŸŠπŸŠπŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…

11/11/22, 5:04 PM
Hi Anonymous!! Thanks 4 your positive comments/feedback!! I'm so appreciative 4 your/the other readers' thoughts/ideas/insight-- it continues to feed the "inner kinky windmills of my mind":smiling_imp: And don't worry-- I won't leave "the 4 sex fiends" HANGIN 4 long:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: As for Luthor, in this particular storyline, I characterize him like "a devilish onion", with ever-evolving layers to be "peeled back" & strategically revealed, so I hope you thoroughly ENJOY how his "ongoing villanous, yet seductive growth" will continue!!:smirk_cat: I will DEF keep an "eagle eye" out for your story featuring Killer Croc & the BATMAN-- sounds HOTTT!!:fire: and BTW, yes, the Spiral review staff is EXCELLENT about executing the process as quickly as possible, but from what I understand, they have been recently "bogged down" with a "literary tidal wave" of stories, so it might take a bit longer, so be patient (I'm not the most patient person, so it's an "personal growth exercise" for me, LOL!)!!! Again, THANKS 4 the positive comments & ENJOY your weekend!:sunglasses:
Nov 11, 2022
11/11/22, 4:41 PM
Curious if they will fall in love?
Zai
11/11/22, 10:50 AM
Oh yes, I forgot to mention that BJ-EL is now calling Bruce, sir. Hmm, that's a new twist. Maybe Bruce could be fucking Jimmy or Bizzaroboi, and Rico cums along, ready to fuck. So first he'd feed his Hispanic long schlong down Batsy's throat, then get behind the superhero's jockstrapped, round muscled ass and begin munching on the virgin snatch. Of course we all would love for the sexy bodyguard, aka hero wrangler, aka Dominator of superhero bitch's to pop Bruce's cherry so hard and so, so, deep. Yummmmmmm... πŸ‘…πŸ’

11/11/22, 4:20 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANKS, ZAI, 4 your addendum comments!! Yes, I :heartpulse: that you pick up on the "various nuances" that I "lob out" to the readers in this storyline!! The next couple of chapters will be "baited" with exciting, unexpected "scene shifts", that will hopefully keep the readers "on the edge of their seats" & "pining for MORE"!!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THX a MILLION for your :sparkling_heart: & support!!:pray: Have a SPANK-tacular weekend!!:boom:
11/11/22, 7:31 AM
Good chapter, but i feel a twist coming on somewhere. Lex as a Master will not want to give up control so easy

11/11/22, 4:00 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Hi MalSkin!! THANK YOU 4 your kind words/comments! You are right to feel a twist coming/cumming....AND it is CUMMING!!! Appreciate your positivity & Have an AWESOME weekend!:innocent:
mic
11/11/22, 3:54 PM
love it. more student doctors who try to learn , trick more dumb jocks
11/11/22, 3:13 PM
HOT!!!